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Old May 16th, 2008, 08:42   #4 (permalink)
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Nice job Only one thing to point out, its more of a language error than anything. 'Prone to close combat'. Prone is the wrong word.. makes it sound like its something that just happens to us in turn 3, even if facing a gunline id just change it to...vulnerable i think. Vulnerable to Assault.
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