[Boomer]

The problem with the amour save modifier is this,

Warplock Rifle: R:30" S:5 AP:3 T:H1, Blast, Pinning, Warplasma Shell, Warplasma Acid
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The units caught within the Blast of a Warplasma Shell suffer a -2 modifier to their AS, that is accumulative with further successful Hits.

So this would make the warplock rifle a AP 1 weapon??? So a warplock rifle has a longer range than a Boltgun, and is so powerful it can slice though Terminator armour?

Also yourfleet of paw , I think is abit much, fleet of claw is 1 D6. Rolling two and picking the best would be nice but hardly fair
if your playing ‘nids or elder.

I like your fluff, but it’s a little bit too long.
It’s great that you come up with all the detailed background but I think you should have the rules and the fluff separate.

Are you planning to make this in to an actual army? Cos I feel the rules are quite complex, I mean I have trouble remembering what bio morphs all my carnifex’s have!
It would be a shame to go to all the effort of writing rules and making an army to then not be able to use it because people don’t fancy using your rules.
Do you have a legal back up list incase this happens, such as the Lost & Damned list (yes I know if defunct now, but it would be easier to get people to play with those rules than your own made up ones.)