Hmm. The idea is cool, although to me it seems a little bit too 'Underworld'ish. What you should do, and this is a completely SUGGESTIVE idea so dont take this angrily, but you should have a vampire that was a human, and he got turned vampire, now dont get me wrong, he likes being a vampire, but he also is mad that he is a vampire cuz he liked human too, so he takes revenge on all vampires, while still liking to kill humans, and he wants to cleanse the world of other vampires and humans. so like you could have one part where he traps a vampire in a glass prison and waits til the sun comes out to watch the ***** squirm. another cool murder scene that would pretty funny is that he walks into a room with a squirt gun and just unloads on a bunch of vampires. once again, all just suggestions, but i think it would be cool.
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