Tell me what you honestly think about this Homegrown Space marine army list. It will be very much appreciated. [SIZE=7]

Space Marine Army
The Cyclone Militia
1500 Points
33 Models

H.Q.

Chaplain Demetrius
Motorcycle
Melta Bombs
Auspex
Teleport Homer
Master-Crafted Crozius Arcanum
Artificer Armor
Terminator Honors
Frag Grenades
168 Pts.

Troops

Team Alpha
10 Men Total
Melta
Auspex
Heavy Bolter
Krak Grenades
187 Pts.


Team Bravo
10 Men Total
Melta
Auspex
Missile Launcher
Krak Grenades
Veteran Sergeant Damion
Plasma Pistol
Artificer Armor
Terminator Honors
Melta Bombs
247 Pts.

Elites

Terminators
5 Men Total
Teleport Homer
Assault Cannon
Heavy Flamer
255pts.

Terminators
5 Men Total
210 Pts.

Heavy Support

Predator Annihilator
Heavy Bolter Side Sponsons
Smoke Launchers
Extra Armor
Storm Bolter
Searchlight
Dozer Blades
164 Pts.

Landraider
Extra Armor
Smoke Launchers
Storm Bolter
Searchlight
269 Pts.