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The Thunder Scars
Prolouge: In a distant future, 40,000 years from now, on a planet named Viash'nu. There are beings called Tau, fierce warriors that battle for there destiny, The Greater Good. But on this planet, the Tau are renegades, and this is there home world. This is story about one of the greatest renegade Tau Commander, nearing with the greatest one, O'shavah (Commander Farsight). The Thunder Scar Tau, Commander Pao'Shans race, had alied with the Thunder Scar Knights, or in the imperium of mankind, known as Grey Knights, or Daemonhunters. They allied with each other because the Imperium were looking to exterminate them. For allying is blasphemy against the God-Emperor of mankind, the most ruthless of beings, immortal, but he cannot smell, sleep, touch, or taste. His blood is replaced by sickly fluid and it is the only way he has a heart beat, beating in the cold rotting cage of his body.
-=Battle for Viash'Nu-=
Commander Pao'Shan drafted Thunder Scar Fire Warriors with anger. He knew that the Chaos Lord, Varric, will not wait any longer to take Viash'Nu, the homeworld for most Thunder Scar Tau.
"Fellow Tau, we shall not let Varric take our planet. As most of you know, we must hurry. He has already taken most of the eastern side of the planet. We must stomp them flat here, at Ka'Por. Now men, do not be afraid, think of it as a dream, just a bad dream, and we are all the heavenly cleansers. Now come, we mount inside our suits, we get into our armor, we rip our weapons off the racks, and we fight till the very end!"
The Tau gave a mighty shout, and within 10 minutes, they arrived at Ka'Por. The broadsides were walking all the way with the Ultra-Orca hovercraft. The Fire Warriors grabbed there Rifles, put on their helmets, attatched there shields, and marched out. 48 warriors climbed out of the back entrance. And a few kilometres away, stood the Chaos Lord Varric stood grinning. He alerted his Khorne Berserkers that the enemy were here. And went to their assigned posts. Pao'Shan mounted himself in his golden Suit. His burst cannon, plasma rifle and Target-Lock were all scarred by blue thunder. They all sprinted throughtout the ruins of the city. Pao'Shan smiled in his suit. He got into a com link with Tak and Por, the only 2 Broadside Battlesuits
"Tak, Por, stay together, I dont want to loose you too. If we dont win here, we die and we will never come back. Were the last hope for this city. And one of the last, for our world.
..."Tak, Por, stay together, I dont want to loose you too. If we dont win here, we die and we will never come back. Were the last hope for this city, and one of the last for our planet."
Tak roared into the com link "I am going to purge this of these mindless fools!"
"And I shall exterminate the evil that presides!" Por says enraged.
The scars fanned out. Pao'Shan took a 6 man squad of warriors with him. The orca had fled. If they loose half of there force, he knew that he would be the one to seal there fate. The squad captains stayed in com link connection, as they were in a religious bonding it forbidded them to be without contact on the battle field. Varric walked right into the center of the intersection.
The ground was dead, life seemed to hold its breath.
"Come on you pathetic bony idiots! Shoot me!" laughed Varric. "Tak do you have a lock on him?" whispered Pao'shan,
"Yes, I'm about to--", a computer voice came on,"SIGNAL DEAD, SIGNAL DEAD
SIGNAL DEAD" Pao'Shan was extremely enraged. He knew Tak was dead only because they didnt get there fast enough. He came out of his dark pit and began shooting Varric. All the warriors were shooting the Berserkers that seemed to come out of no where in the city ruins. Varric didnt seem harmed until finally his armor had been peirced. Pao'Shan went up to him and shot him right in his face. He died not only by this shot, but my also 1 very nicely targetted shot by Por.
"Por! Varric! You took out the last life he would ever have." Suddenly Varric stood up, and punched down the crisis battlesuit, opening the carcass, Pao'Shan was yelling,
"Help me!!! Help me!!!" scread Pao'Shan
The fire warriors shot at Varric, and he seemed to be extremely hurt, but he just kept punching at the suit, he picked up a stone, and bashed it. Varric wouldnt die without Pao'Shan dying either. Por shot at him again, and half of Varric was incinerated, and the other half was pummeling at Pao'Shan. Right before Pao'Shan was about to have his skull crushed, Varrics attention went to something, a strange thing that completely had him staring at it. He was smashed against the wall, and all the warriors started only to shoot at him. The Khorne were beginning to drop dead at the sight of Varric dying, for they were bound to his soul aswell. Then the strange light turned into thumps, big thumps. Then the sound of many warriors. Metal they were coloured, each having a giant sword or halberd. The warriors thought them of angels. Angels with heavy weaponry, but they could'nt really see them, they were mighty and bulky, like the Chaotic, but, holy. The supposed Leader walked over to Pao'Shan, and asked if he was ok,
"Are you angels?"
He said tiredly,
"No fair Tau Commander. We are the Thunder Scars, except, we are the Thunder Scar Knights, of the Daemonicus Exterminatus. Our kind calls us betrayers since we help other species."
Said the Grand-Master kindly.
"Thank you... For saving this city, if we populate it and create life here, we'll exist again... We share our world with you.
Narrator: I hope you liked part 2 of this story. I might extend it if it seems to short. Ok to the story. Will the Imperium find the Thunder Scar race and destroy the planet? Or will they live in peace and experience the greater Taus revenge on the Thunder Scar Tau? Find out someday in the near future if your lucky!
-=Survival of the Fittest=-
The Thunder Scars Scoured Viash'Nu. The Daemonic were overwhelmed by there power, because of the Daemon Hunters, they became extremely powerful against the Chaos. And were able to slowly rebuild there cities. But there was quite a few forests around that rumored had Great Blooded Knarlocs, or Furious Knarlocs. They had all turned Daemonic and angry since the Chaos had arrived. The DaemonHunters and the Tau both knew Knarlocs are vicous.
"Pao'Shan, we must kill these fiends, they've terrorized us for too long" said the Grand Master, angrily.
Pao'Shan and 48 fire warriors scoured the forest. Finally coming upon one giant Knarloc.
"Shoot him down!"-Pao'Shan projected
"Grand-Master, get over here at once! We have found a blooded great knarloc!"-Pao'Shan whispered into his comlink,
"I'm sending a Grey Knight squad over at your location at once."
The grand master replied back. The Knarloc was ripping Tau into peices until finally Pao'Shan got a perfect shot in the Knarlocs bloody eye with his plasma rifle. It fell back, while warriors were brutally killing it, then the Grey knights arrived, half of them gone and another knarloc behind them, an even bigger one that Pao'Shan supposed was its mother. It killed a few more Tau, then the Grey Knights had to fall back to Tau ranks while slashing at the brutal beast. Finally a few more hits and it was down, while more pulse rifles were shooting at it, then from behind a baby Knarloc feasts on Tau and Grey Knight flesh until the Justicar and Pao'Shan were left.
"Pao'Shan, I hope that suit can do some crazy stuff otherwise we'll both die." said the Justicar very scared, "FOR THE GREATER GOOD AND THE SCAR!", Pao'Shan went right up to the beast and shot at it atleast 20 times in its belly and eye. It scratched his suit and sent him flying, he continued to shoot while the Justicar was shooting as well. Finally with 1 great slash, the justicar had ripped its skin to see its heart, Pao'Shan shot vigouresly until finally, the liquid that was in the knarlocs veins were plasma. It fell over dead. Pao'Shan and the Justicar had killed the Knarlocs in the damned great forest and returned to the Vish'Nu capital city. Where they had relaxed, and gained a few pounds of food on there bones.
-=Defence at Mar'Van City=-
Just before leaving to deal with some more Knarlocs, Pao'Shan received a distress call at Mar'Van, a small Tau city. The Tau on the comlink said that they were being attacked by giant metal machines that looked like the Grey Knight Scar people. When Pao'Shan heard this he immediately told them to take cover, while he would talk to the Grand Master about this. "Grand-Master Scar!! The Space Marines.... are in a city at Mar'Van! I must go with my men to destroy them. For you know that if they find you, they shall destroy my planet. I want you to rip off the Imperial com link, and destroy it. I dont want them coming after you, and in the crossfire my people being killed! Now flee to the very top of the world! We shall meet you at Zurinon, the great mountain. Now go!". Pao'Shan was extremely worried. He knew that the Space Marines were deadly. He knew he would have extreme difficulties defeating them, but he knew he could fight and destroy them...
"Warriors! Mount up in the suits! I'll need a squad of Broadsides, Por, get your 2 best men and I'll need a devilfish, and 2 hammerheads. I want 36 warriors and 32 Kroot warriors. I will also need 10 gun drones. Crisis Bodyguards! Mount!"
Pao'Shan mounted into his Thunder Scar Golden Crisis suit. The warriors were mounted into Pao'Shans cousins Manta Ray. The one true Thunder Scar Battleship. The only Manta Missile Destroyer the Scars have gotten since the purgation of the Zin'garr, or "Dark Evil Kroot Zarr", and it was destroyed by a thousand Kroot Guns. The ship was huge and wondrous. Just as the same they got to Mar'Vann very fast and the destroyer flocked back to Zurinon to check if the Grey Knights had gotten there yet. It would stay there for a long time. They were on the south eastern corner of the city when they unmounted.The Kroots were staged around into the cracks of the city, while Pao'Shan and his men were to rescue the lone annonymous Tau, to see what happened. The Warriors stayed in a straight row going through the city. It was vast and deserted with building rubble and bodies everyehere. The tanks were staged on the south eastern and south sides of the city so that there line of site was good. A 6 man squad of warriors stayed with one of the Hammerheads, the rest were sent out for killing marines. The Pao'Shan HQ squad was split up, they would go throughout the city. Pao'Shan heard the cries of Tau, he turned a corner and there at the end of the alley way, were a Tactical Squad of Space Marines! He shot his plasma rifle atleast twenty times before he was sure they had died, but someone must've alerted the other space marines that there were Tau here. Tactical squads of men were rampaging throughout the southern area now. Pao'Shan just got out of the area before a Hunter-Killer Missile was launched in his direction. While the Space Marines were going through the city, the Kroots lashed out and came out of there cover and assaulted and ripped them apart, eating there meat and having a bloody great time devouring marines.
The Fire Warriors were shooting like mad, ripping apart Marines with plasma and making them run away like the cowards they were. The Kroots regrouped and were heading west, where a lightly defended Hammerhead was being attacked by about 20 marines. The Kroot got there just in time as 2 Fire Warriors fell to the ground. the hammerhead swung its gun into there place and shot a blast area of atleast 20 feet, and blew 10 space marines to the machines that spawned them. The Kroots were munching on the marines, crunching 5 before some of them started to die. Finally the last 5 were shot down by the solid blast of the Railgun, and were vaporized, the Kroot were discontented, but they smelled blood so they leaped away, north until they were surrounded by a Predator, a 10 man Command squad with a nasty looking Chaplain, and were then bloodlusted, they rampaged against the command squad while the Predator was shooting atleast 10 of them down, the command squad nearly fell but the Chaplain still got away, wounded with part of his back ripped off. The final assault was when Pao'Shan and his Crisis were back into a group, the Fire Warriors behind them, and they charged towards the last of them, killing all the Space Marines left, the extra tank, the 30 men left, they all charged and destroy them all into hot piles of Plasma and incineration.
"YEAAAAAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!& #33;!!!!!!!!!!!!!!& #33;!!!!!!!!!!!!" All the Warriors shouted, as Pao'Shan started to get into comlink with his Cousin to bring back the Manta.
End of Part 4
-=The Battle of Mount Zurinon=-
Pao'Shan got his cousin to send over the Manta. He climbed in knowing he had done a good job. It would take about 2 days, for them to get back. Once it got there they all mounted. Pao'Shan had his own quarters which secluded him from the rest. His dreams were chaotic. And at once he knew something was wrong.
"Commander Pao'Shan!" Por standed at the threshold of Pao'Shans door way.
"What is it?" Pao'Shan said afraid of what was going to come out of his mouth next,
"We are at Mount Zurinon, but the Grey Knights are under attack!" Por shouted.
"I know.. I know. Rally the troops, there is no rest for the Thunder Scar Tau..." Pao'Shan said very weary.
Por and him ran to their suits. The troops were notified and outraged. They all went and unloaded onto the icy plateau. Angry and tired, they still were obedient to there master. They saw the Grey Knights and immediatly charged to them. Pao'Shans gleaming suit made the Grey Knights unweary. They were battling the Black Templars, Space Marines, the worst thing that could have happened to the planet. They shot against the enemies, vaporizing marine after marine, until they were all dead but the Command Squad, they were in mortal combat with the Great Grand Master, he had bad luck at hitting and had to run back then shoot them, all but the chaplain was left, a grin on his face made Pao'Shan angry, he charged at him, inflicting deadly anger across him, they ripped off his helmet, which very nastily nearly ripped his head off from his body, and demanded him to speak, they all knew the Marines would kill themselves if captured, but they destroyed his weapon just in time, he was very angry, at this and finally spoke, he was unloyal to the Emperor.
"We are sending out a man called Thaleus to report to the astropaths to psychicly destroy all the Thunder Scar Grey Knights, and making sure they all die in the next 6 moons this planet has, I suggest you just kill yourselves, all of you, the Imperium will crush you anyways. The Emperor strikes T'au in the next 12 moons anyway, theres no point in living! Petty fools! Hahahaha-" The Grand Master had jabbed his weapon into his face, which instantly killed him, and shot blood across the snow, and Pao'Shans suit.
"I am blooded! And I am renegade, O'Shavah would be proud of all of us, but he wouldnt be proud of what we are going to do. Men, into the Manta. As Lord over this great place I must demand something to be done, I want full evacuation of the planet effective immediatly, I want every god damn person out of here and in a ship on there way to T'au. We may be renegades, but we still are honourable to T'au. I want us out of here before 6 moons! Go! Now!........
Pao'Shan got out of his suit and put it in the manta. He was dreadfully worried that they wont get away in time. The people would panic, but he knew they would survive to live the next day peacefully. This Battle of Battles, this War of Wars was going to test the skills of the Thunder Scars, the other great sept's, and himself.
"Sir! The council shall meet you in the Battle Room to discuss what shall be done." said the young Tau strongly, "Wait, young Tau, what do you think will happen if we lose and all the Tau die." said Pao'Shan worriedly,
"Then we wouldn't have fulfilled our destiny, for the Greater Good, and then, everything shall be in blackness."
"You know it cannot happen, tell them to meet me now in the Battle Room. Tell them it is urgent we do things faster, the Taus time can be short and it can be long, go, NOW!" Pao'Shan shouted.
The young Tau ran off waking up the Grand Master and the council of Elder Scars. Pao'Shan readied himself and he ran to the Battle Room within the minute. "Great elders of the Scar, our planet shall be overrun within the next 6 moons, we must get to T'au, for the Imperium attacks there too. We are honourable renegades! We shall serve the Tau once more, but, we shall conquer the Vior'la system and take there Fire Warriors right after we save them. But we shall only take some. We must expect that all the Tau shall flee to T'au. Making it extremely dense. If there blasts are in a 6 foot radius, approximately 600,000 Tau die from it. And we cant let that happen, for most of them shall be warriors! Once again, we shall fight, For the Greater Good!!" shouts Pao'Shan.
"FOR THE GREATER GOOD!!!!" the Councellors roared. And with that, the next 3 days, Pao'Shan was on a trip, with the Grand-Master, now known as Azazel, were at the grand place with the council of the the ethereal commander, earth caste commander, fire caste commander, etc etc.
"Well than, if it isn't Pao'Shan, the great Thunder Scar Tau" "I am not Tau, I am scar!" The council mumbled among themselves, and finally the commanding ethereal spoke again.
"If what you say is true, and I can see in your eyes that your sincere, then the T'au shall retreat from there cities and fall here, we shall not let people die before there time. Guards, call the transmitter, I need to speak with him NOW!" The guards ran away and got the transmitter.
They came back with a small Tau, about the size of a 10 year old human boy.
"What do you need council?" asked the shy Tau,
"I want you to transmit this message to all the Major sept's, then they shall transmit that message to the lesser sept's. Write this down:"
The Tau got out a strange pen, and a black peice of Tau Paper.
"This is the Ethereal Council Lord of T'au. We are recalling every single Tau from our galaxy to T'au. The Emperor of Mankind has an army ready to destroy us all. He moves out and he shall be here in the next 12 T'au Moons. Full evacuation is immenent. Our savior, Pao'Shan of the Thunder Scars, has informed us about this. They had fought the Men of the Emperor and we are convinced about this. We shall have the Grand Master, now known as Zurinos, to help here. The Grand Master is a Human, but they have all joined the Thunder Scars and have cloned and created Syrums that have enhanced the Thunder Scars immensely. Pao'Shan has told me that privetly. FOR THE GREATER GOOD -=End Transmission."
The Tau was very quick and was done right after he finished.
"Ethereal! This is blasphemy against the Greater Good! They have broken the-"
"ENOUGH!" The Ethereals voice was restless and echoed throughout the hall making them all cover there ears.
"They shall aide us in whatever way they can! They are still Tau. Now leave! Transmit it IMMEDIATELY! Guards! Take him away!" The Fire Warriors took them to the room where he gave his messages.
"Pao'Shan, you shall aide me in battle. You shall meet Aun'Shi, the great ethereal, in battle. And we shall grace you."
End of Part 6
Can you see the tension rising? The Emperors eyes have moved to T'au. His gaze has alerted the most passionate of Space Marines and Imperial Guard, and Grey Knights. Watch out for the new Part 7 of the Thunder Scar Tau, -=Galactic War=-
The Defenders of Bork'An
Pao'Shan was resltess that night. He couldnt sleep, and felt very tired in the morning. He looked in his mirror, where his face had been scarred by the thunder was across his face in a jagged pattern. He had to always wash his face with a liquid made out of Kroot blood and a few other disgusting things. He had looked out of his window, and what he saw amazed him. Tau, everywhere, limitless, countless Tau. In a way, it releived him. But he dare not go out, they would surely riddicule him for his scar. Then the same young Tau was at his door. "Sir! The Grand Commander of the Fire Warriors wishes to speak with you to discuss where you shall be fighting." He said very abruptly. "I shall see him as soon as possible." Pao'Shan met the great commander in the commanders ready room. "Pao'Shan, as you know, the humans are going to strike against us fast, and hard. And we are asking you to get into a Stealth Suit with your most favoured of friends. It shall protect you, and you will bea ble to shoot them down. The burst cannons are assault weapons, and so, considering the pulse-" "Look, great fire warrior caste commander, I wish to be in my suit. I have used plasma rifles, and missile pods too long to be seperated from them, and you may use your supplies to the fullest, even though it might not pose like anything. But I think it is best for an army of stealthsuits to attack the humans head on. I shall lead that attack." Pao'Shan said aggraveted. "That does seem to be great, say, about 60 Stealth Troopers, not including you? My finest of warriors?" "Yes clearly that would be best, then I shall take my suit and charge the enemy, considering I am still renegade." Pao'Shan said fiercly and fiendishly. The commander nodded and went back into his room. Pao'Shan had to leave in a few hours after that and made preperations that all his warriors be in the stealth suits. When he had to leave, Por had chosen to go into a stealthsuit, but a better one and Pao'Shan had gotten into a link with Por before they left. Then they all mounted in a massive manta, and then they were to all heading to planet Bork'An on the southern fringe of the Tau galaxy. About 1 Viash'Nuian moon later, the humans would arrive at the planet, lucky there all there. They set up a base camp on a giant plateau. The warriors were restless and weren't sleeping, Pao'shan told them to try and sleep, and if it did not work, then fake sleeping it. Reslessness in the camp was a major factor about what the Scars were having. Then Pao'Shan heard a crack in his tent, "WARRIORS!!!!!!!" Pao'Shan screamed, "THERE HERE!!!!!!!!!!!" He roared once more. Then atleast 80 tyranid warriors came out of the area of plateau, with a hive tyrant not so far away. "Damn them! They've hired the tyranids as mercinaries! Stay away from there claws and shoot at them, we can take them down if he keep backing out and away!" Pao'Shan mounted his crisis suit and jumped behind the tyranids shooting the living hell out of the warriors, 10 fell from his hot plasma. Then they started to reap him with there claws, inflicting maniacle slash after slash. "FOR THE GREATER GOOD!!!!!!!!!!" Pao'Shan shouted. He blasted them off of him with one graceful swoop into the air, then continued firing at the bony bloody basterds. The stealth were taken down quite a bit, down to 48 warriors now. Por was doing great! 10 warriors more went down from him. they continued firing and in the end killed all but the carnifex. "It is a good day to DIE!!!!" Pao'Shan charged full throttle at the carnifex, hoping for the worst, and it came. It slashed his suit wide open, nearly getting to his flesh, and slicing one of his jumppacks to shreds. Pao'Shan shot at him multiple times with his plasma rifle, and once with a missile pod, and the Carnifex was just about to strike.........
End of part 7?
-=Galactic War=- Chapter 1 Dawn and Dusk
... When something was jammed in its back and it spurted out blood all over his crisis suit. And it had also stained his clothes. The thing that struck it was a random stealth trooper answering Pao'Shans aid as most troops started to leave the bloody mess of flesh and ripped parts of unidentifyable body parts splattered across the grim scene in the moonlight sky. "Thank you warrior... may the Greater Good become closer to be acheived from your act." Pao'Shan said in a tired sort of way. He got up, and immenently his suit broke, he fell and landed dangerously near a cliff, dropping ovre unconsious. Pao'Shan blacked out. Once he woke up, he was in a Tauish hospital on Bork'An. They told him he was out for 1 Tau Month and that all his warriors returned safely. He sighed in releif and in the next 3 days he was to return to defeat the human base where the Tyranids were slaughtered. Once he got in his suit, and his warriors were fresh and were able to kill again, they set out. Once they got behind this big hill for cover, the sun and the moon were on opposites of each other, creating a very beautiful twilight. Pao'shan ordered a 3 man squad to go out and see what they are doing. They had climbed over the hill when they saw monstrosity. There was a gigantic Chaos Space Marine Black Legion! Atleast 200 Chaos marines and quite a few tanks. They jumped down and they didnt know what to say. "Pao'Shan, there is an army of 200 Chaos Space Marine... there are many tanks... I dont think we'll be able to make it sir." The Tau said crying after what he said. "We shall fight till the very end. I shall not be recalled back to T'au and made a fool of! FOR THE SCAR!" Pao'Shan roared over his 48 men, then they charged head on. The chaos didnt know what they were looking at, it was a mirage of so mmutch stealth they thought they were mirages. That was a mistake they made, they ripped open fire, making the deaths of 20 men, the tanks were targetting but couldnt get a lock, that's when Por smashed the top of the now known as predator, and opened fire on the men inside, and started targetting other chaotic tanks. Then Pao'Shan came out moving faster than he had ever been, launching his missile pods on the tanks, and melting a marine to its death. They fought hard, and after about a day or so, the chaos had retreated like the cowards they were. "VICTORY!!!!!!!!!" Pao'Shan roared once more. But when he looked over the horizen, there were the marines. They had established this world as now theres. There was a giant tower, and the Chaos Marines were driving right into it. But surely the marines would know. Then he saw they get vaporized on the spot. "What in the name of Scar!??!? Fellow Tau, we die this day! But before we let them take our lives, WE GIVE THEM THE THUNDER OF THE SCAR!!!!" Pao'Shan's warriors were chanting Tau prayers. And finally, they were ready, they had all marched straight toward's it. Then suddenly many Space Marines came out of no where, atleast 500 of them, and about 200 tanks. They were blue and yellow, a little bit like the scars, but Pao'Shan did not like it, his suit was the most visible of all since he was in his golden scarred crisis suit. Then, a great space marine is big heavy armor came and saluted them, for he was sure they were going to die honourabley.
End of chapter 1?
-=Galactic War=- Chapter 2 The Brothers Unite
Pao'Shan got into comlink with the remaining Tau forces. "I want all of you to fall back immediatly if we drop half our numbers, we cannot loose to these! Those who cannot have the Tau'Va have a Mont'ka waiting for them! NOW LETS GIVE THEM THE MONT'KA!!!!!" Pao'Shan and his warriors shot aimlessly, killing and blood splattering on this gruesome scene, the warriors roared out MONT'KA! And were reaping hell with there burst cannons. Then suddenly a giant gleam shone from the horizen, more marines Pao'Shan thought. He was right, atleast 500 more marines came marching, shooting at them all, sanctuary for these honourable Tau said a marine, who later on was called a heretic and maimed. Only a few warriors fell, then the skies were blackend. The tower was blackening aswell. Then, the most horrific thing crossed Pao'Shans mind, "What if the Chaos have come?". And he hoped he wasnt right but then a warp hole rolled onto the planet and a 2 Black Legions of the terrifying basterds mounted down, destroying and decomposing whatever they touched. "FALL BACK!!!!" He shouted in his com-link. "Charge to the mountains and split up, our com-links have to be turned off on my mark once we get there." Then the Chaos were in warfare with the marines, blow after blow, some of them got into close combat, wrecking the marines and chaotic very badly. Once they got to the plateau, they could see that the space marines had won. And that they were seeing where the stealth suits would be. They charged up the giant mountain, if they fell they would either die from the fall or the oncoming space marines. "Turn off your comlinks until we get to the other side of the mountain, but once were at the top, start firing down to kill the marines from atop, GO GO GO!" Pao'Shan jump packed all the way to the foot of the mountain on the other side. Where he found a small Tau encampment. "Villagers run away right now the Space Marines are coming and you must flee to Bork'Ans capital city!!" Pao'Shan had shot the ground with his rifle and scared them away. They fled through the fields of grass and out of site in no time at all. He power-jumped his way up the mountain and started to aim and lock on tanks, shot, and destroyed atleast 4. "For the Scar!" All the Tau shouted. Half of them belonged to the Greater Good aswell. "Scouts sir! They have long rifles and we know that they can shoot to kill, anything. We should retreat" Says a Greater Good warrior. "Yes, Captains! order you men to fall back, we shall fight at Bork'Ans capital city! Come on!" He shouted in the comlink, which frazzled the Captains. They jump-packed all the way there, and once they all got there, they were cleaned up and the cannons they had were reloaded to maximum capacity. Pao'Shan was still in his suit increasing how far he could see, then he used a Tau-Like binoculars and look up at the mountain. It was swarming full Space Marines. "Send a distress signal to Vior'La. We need Fire Warriors!" "There is no need of that now Pao'Shan." Pao'Shan was amazed, it was the Grand Master of the Grey Knights!! "The Grey Knights are at your aide." "Your.. here. It is an honour once again to see you actually alive" Pao'Shan said befuddled, "I strive for it. Now, I am sending a few of our tanks, filling them with all my men here, and sending them ripping across the battlefield. We will leave none to survive. Pao'Shan, it seems that our times will always come close, and always with each other. It was good I found my Xenos opposite." "Opposite?" "Well you seem to also manifest some type of psychic power. I've noticed it since we destroyed Chaos Lord Varrics army. You seemed to glow, and I was amazed at the power you could have. Pao'Shan, your one of the Tau who are the Greater Good. People help you and you help them. Now we must save Bork'An! For the Greater Good! For the SCAR!!!" The Grand Masters voice echoed throughout the base, and even touched the mountain, where it began to rumble, and some marines were toppled by the giant ice glaciers falling on them. The Grey Knights were inspired and all raised there Nemesis weapons into the air. "As a mighty ancient civilization once said among the plains of Terra, "It is time for killing!"." spat Pao'Shan.
End of Chapter 2
Sorry I havent made any fluff, but this is what I got so far. I have been busy with a Science Fair, and now I am competing to go to the Nationals, ^_^ wish me luck my friends.
-=Galactic War=- Finale
The Grey Knights, and Tau were restless. But within the hour, the Space Marines had come. "Alright, give me an Incinerator" asked the Grand Master. And in a few minutes a Tau came dragging the giant peice of metal. "Thank you" he said with quite a bit of grace. The Grand Master mounted into a Land Raider Crusader, with Tau markings on it. And was ready to go with his 9 man retinue. "Pao'Shan, Strength and Speed" "What do you mean my friend?" "Ancient Human quote, it kind of means good luck, be weary, and be strong and fast." "Ah yes, I should've known." Pao'Shan got in his suit, and written down 'Bad Ass' in very difficult to understand way. The Tau were lined up behind some of the giant boulders and were ready to shoot. The air was still, the wind was still, nothing moved. Until Pao'Shan finally shot the very first shot. The Plasma Rifle had shot across the field and blown up a Tank which crushed an entire squad of Space Marines. Then all hell broke loose. Pulse Rifles shot so fast, the Marines didnt know what hit them. The Hammerheads were implemented with a cloaking device, until they shot. The air was turned into Fire within minutes. there were rivers of blood and the Railguns ingnited the air and whatever it touched, would incinerate. More Marines came, and so the call for reinforcements was asked for. "We need the Raiders" Pao'Shan said, breathing heavily. "On our way, my friend. I am the white tank, the others are black, please safe guard me until I get all the way to the head of the damned army." "Damned?" Pao'Shan said shocked. "Yes, I sensed a Daemon inside of the Chaplain, he is the Master." "Oh Kroot droppings..." Pao'Shan said with a sigh. He found the white tank across the field, which was now being heavily snowed on, and started shooting at anything going its way. "I want a squad of 6 stealth troopers to accompany me to keep that white tank safe! If we fail we shall all die" Six warriors immediately came to him without question. They started jumping, all the way to the Tank, and jumped around it being sure of anything coming its way. Then, 'it' came. The Daemon ripped the body apart that it was in, and emerged in blood. "It is.... here!" It killed the warriors instantly, and was going for the Holy Crusader. "You shall die today! I learned this from the Grand Master!" Pao'Shan had immenseley improved his movement, and his eyes were starting to bulge. The Plasma rifle he was holding was sending out high voltage shocks of energy, then, "EXTERMINATUS!" Pao'Shan shot, with a full blast of plasma at the Khornate Daemon. At first it realised it had been hit, but then the blast got to him. He exploded with blood and organs inside him burst. His blood was turned into plasma, and was violently shaking. He fell over, only having one arm, two legs and a torso, his body was being ripped apart. But he wouldnt die! Pao'Shan roared and the daemons mind opened up to him somehow. He could see atleast a million legions of Chaos were spreading out through the galaxy for a Black Cleanse. He went mad. And with that, the Daemon literally blew up and the entire mountain was covered in blood, the rivers of blood became giant pools. And after that, Pao'Shan went normal. They all stopped fightning, looked at him strangely, in a way almost like worship, then went back to fightning. His suit stood proudly over the Holy Crusader. "Pao'Shan! You've unleashed it! Your power!" said the Grand Master amazed. They all fought on, the Holy Crusader released inside a big troop of marines, and killed them very easily. The Holy Crusader went on, shooting down many many things, and the war was over in no time, since the Grey Knights were inspired by the great Grand Master. Pao'Shan slept well that night, and somehow his mind could do things, he was amazed at himself. The only way he could remember any type of psychic power, was when he was a child. There was a small incursion on Viash'Nu, and there was a Chaos Sorcerer, and Inquisitor there. He was one of the lucky Tau who didnt die from the psychic blasts. Pao'Shan woke up, all very nice. And for once wasnt grumpy at the young Tau. "The War is over! We must go to the Ethereals! Pao'Shan, I shall finally meet the council, oh I am very excited." said the Grand Master all happy that the killing was over, for the time being...
End of the Finale, and Galactic War
Hell yeah, its finally over, but what else does this great Tau face? Read on my friends I am Posting this as a full document onto the great
Nice story. It's got good characters, but it's a bit long.
I made it in instalments but the last 2 stories are new.
Wow that is a very good story line. I've read most of this before but now you have it in a easy to read post...
Any Ideas for continuing Pao'Shans story? Another War? Maybe he gets to the emp- GTG! ROFL! Ideas flowing in like a 'river'!
Jeez, Vaughan, thats impressive. I'll read it again properly later when I have more time, but don't be giving up on it.
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Ive been waitin for a new part of the fluff! Good stuff, man!
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Once again, I am sorry to Ulf Thunderclap and Pheonix5 for always saying how great I am without sucking up or being rude in any way possible.