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The White Wolves
Founding Planet: Povanus
Chapter Name: “The White Wolves”
Chapter Number: 1117
Chapter Mater: Lord Vzar
The White Wolves were founded in the Segmentum Tempestus in the 31st Millennia to add numbers to the growing ranks of the Space Marines. Their first campaign was on a Planet named Lin Sanor, they arrived to late to find the brave Imperial Defenders had already been slaughtered by the forces of Chaos, The Brave Marines of the White Wolves Chapter descended onto the planet and then fought in a 4 month evenly pitched battle. In the final month the Chaos Lieutenant escaped with a large force and went on the continue their destruction of the galaxy, The White Wolves victory was short lived when they were ordered to track down the Chaos Lieutenant and kill him and his remaining troops. After a 7 week search the “War band” was tracked down to a moon near the Imperial Guard planet of Tahrran. The battle on the moon was short and bloody, even though the White Wolves won they lost many men in the battle.
After their first campaign people began to hear more and more rumours about the new Adeptus Astartes chapter, the soon grew in fame. They got a Chushy garrison duty and began to lose their fighting effectiveness. A year or so later they were pushed straight into combat to help fighting against the forces of Chaos at Eye of Terror, they were their in the pitch of the battle, purging the Chaos scum, their wild war cries of “For the Imperium!” could be heard even in the pitch of battle when the noise was at it’s maximum. As the clouds of dust disbanded their stood the White Wolves, their white and blue armour now stained red, their weapons worn and smoking, their faces fixed and stern, they had won….and they had lived.
The White wolves now travel the universe answering the call of the emperor where ever it is heard or needed. The still stand strong, and they are willing to throw themselves into combat at any time.
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Looks pretty good. Is the Terminator deliberately a lighter colour than the marines, or am I just imagining things?
You're aiming for a blue-grey and a pale grey, yes? The wings on the chestplate stand out well in all three schemes, which is a nice touch.
Have a refreshing sleep. I guess I'll come back later and see what your fluff looks like!
I'm fine, thankyou, Susan! (Kryten from Red Dwarf, if I remember correctly... It just seemed appropriate.)
Now, onto the point of this post; the fluff.
A bit shorter than I was expecting, but you've already said you're going to add more so that's not a problem.
Aside from that, good imagary in the fluff. A couple of typos you might want to iron out, but that's just me being picky!
Well honestly, I think this fluff lacks...alot of things. Youve definatly got a good foundation for yourself to build off of, but theres no depth here! Not to sound mean or anything, but this is basically "space marines founded, space marines fight, space marines fight some more" Build on these! space marines are founded yes, but give us some more background as to why! What chapter did they come from to make this one? Who was thier primarch? Whats thier chapter master like? Why are the terminators LIGHT BLUE!!! lol, i realise you spent alot of time on those pictures, they arent easy to make!
.........why would it matter if your terminators got mixed up with your tactical marines? In fact...wouldnt that be better, as enemy sniper fire (which tends to get those hard to kill fellas, A.K.A terminators) would have a bit tougher time distingiushing between the two troop types?
Lol but you dont have to jump th gun! I wasn't attacking you, i was just saying that the fluff needed more. Just trying to get you to see your chapter from all angles (like why the terminators are light blue) and who the chapter originiated from.
Sorry to be a niusance, but where did you get the picture templates from?
Post your army lists in the ARMY LIST section! Not that hard!