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You might not like it but here we go. This is fluff for a setor I made within the Dark Eldar Army and its got a paint scheme, which i will post pictures of later and please post anything i can do to make it better
Kabal Of the Ozone Dragons
After the raid on the planet of Veda, the Dark Eldar had mascaraed millions of innocent people and taken main control of the main capital and was a successful raid. Lephisto, one of Asdrubael Vect's most favoured body guards and elite solider, who was alive during the fall had happened, had an intention of rebelling against Asdrubael Vect and the Dark Eldar ways. Lephisto had realised of what his people were: evil and full of hatred, Lephisto was once evil but that darkness in his heart has turned to light.This event occurred when he was seeing one of his fellow troop member torturing a women which she was screaming in agony of pain. Lephisto decided to go into hiding and began writing in his scrolls and wrote many new doctrine and law, he called this the 'Manifesto of Life'. There were 3 main points of this writing: 1. The Dark Eldar should change their ways and pledge allegiance to the Emperor, 2. The Dark Eldar shall give up their mean wicked ways and shall never torture a living being again, and 3. The Dark Eldar shall bring peace not misfortune. Asdrubael Vect wondered why his favourite guard was missing. Asdrubael Vect sent a raider squad looking for Lephisto, they later found him on the planet of Povanus. the raider squad saw Lephisto writing on these scrolls and were disgusted with what Lephisto had done. They took Lephisto to Asdrubael Vect at the Council of Veda, many of the trusted AsdrubaelVect's men were there to watch the trial of Lephisto. Asdrubael Vect was angry and sad that his favoured body guard Lephisto and turned on him. Asdrubael Vect asked Lephisto to recant, Lephisto refused and said “Here I stand, I can do no other”,Asdrubael Vect replied "You have betrayed me, I order an execution". Asdrubael Vect ordered an execution of Lephisto, but Lephisto escaped hs demise and escaped to another planet and began to start his work once more. 3 years after the trial, Lephisto goes back to the Planet of Veda, and persuades most of his companion to join his rebellion against AsdrubaelVect and renew their beliefs. Lephisto had 1/3rd of the army to join with him, they were mostly troops and the mandrakes. He knew he would not succeed to persuade the incubi or the wych cult. A civil war broke loose for 10 years, but Lephisto lost the war. Lephisto took a fraction of the Dark Eldar army and fled to a planet called Ashkor. Lephisto named his army the Kabal Ozone Dragons of Ashkor. The Kabal Of Ozone Dragons has new doctrine of war and peace, they vow fully allegiance to the emperor. Many Dark Eldars have chosen to rebell and moved to the planet, Asdrubael Vect has tried to stop this but he cannot locate the planet Ashkor.
Uhm, first of all, check your spelling. Second, why o why would the Dark Eldar want to serve the Emperor? The Emperor thought that all alien life should be eradiacted, and his Imperium works to fullfill that.
Third, why would the Dark Eldar want to stop what they love most, the torturing and killing? Thier life revolves around that, and it has been like that for 10,000 years.
This makes no sense.
It s not all the dark eldar, its a dark eldar elite which changes his mind and heart and way of life which turns the hearts of some dark eldar from dark to light. I dont think you read my fluff correctly, it seemed like you skim read. The dark eldar didnt pledge alliegenice but lephistos squad did.
Oh I did read it, but I am not suprised if I got anything wrong since you really need to work on your grammar.
You make it sound like a huge number of DE came with this Lephisto - a full third of the army in fact - and that's a lot of Dark Eldar. ALl those were killed, and then he took some more? What? Why were many of the Dark Eldar so eager to join with him in the first place? You know why the DE behave like they do? because if they don't, Slaanesh will eat their souls.