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Hey guys just for practice and fun I am going to write a set of connected short stories. I will post them here http://fanfluff.webs.com/Angels%20Revenant.pdf C&C can be left here and I do look forward to any C&C you have be it good bad or horrid I apreciate it. This is my first time writing marine style fiction so do feel free to poke holes.
Hmm, well its good but just a few heads ups:
space marines dont joke, heresy I say! also, you should be able to explain things in less detail, and use references from an army's fluff, such as explosives? melta-bombs!
Think doctrinal, strict and precise.