Xv-88's Fluff For Hire (ffh) - Warhammer 40K Fantasy
 

Welcome to Librarium Online!

Join our community of 80,000+ members and take part in the number one resource for Warhammer and Warhammer 40K discussion!

Registering gives you full access to take part in discussions, upload pictures, contact other members and search everything!


Register Now!

User Tag List

Closed Thread
Page 1 of 4 123 ... LastLast
Results 1 to 10 of 40
  1. #1
    Senior Member XV-88's Avatar
    Join Date
    Sep 2003
    Location
    In a fool's corner.
    Posts
    878
    Mentioned
    0 Post(s)
    Tagged
    0 Thread(s)

    Reputation
    1 (x2)

    OK, here it is people. Starting it off: The Fallen

    With his bloodied berzerker glaive in hand, smoke still pouring out of his still-hot jump pack, Zenith scaned the battlefield. The screams of Templars were loud, but the bloodlust screams of his legion drowned out the other noises. Stopping for a moment to yell commands, his lieutenant, Halzam, soon began ripping through the enemy anew. With each time his power fist hit flesh, the fire of hate visible every time he looked at his commander. Zenith's steely gaze spotted an Emperor's Champion, at the back of his troops, firing with uncanny acuracy and each time killing a marine of the legion. His Legion. With a roar, his Jump packs blasted on, in moments turning the pebbles he was standing on the semi-coherent magma, and sent him flying into the air. He screamed a chant that could be heard over the battlefield, spreading into not only the minds, but the souls of friend and foe alike, strenghthening his forces and putting doubts into the minds of the Templar. He braced for impact, raised his glaive, and just as the champion looked upon him, he whispered, "For Khorne!"

    Well, there you go. I hope you like it.

    Henceforth no man shall set foot upon the world, and all around shall be set sentinals to ward away unwary spacecraft. We must accept that this place is lost to us forever, and is now the eternal habitation of abomination.

    <div class='quotetop'>QUOTE</div><div class='quotemain'>another annoying thing i hate: 47,000 similies in one post. just thoght id throw that in there and see if anybody else hates it as much as i do.</div>

  2. Remove Advertisements
    Librarium-Online.com
    Advertisements
     

  3. #2
    Member arch_heretik's Avatar
    Join Date
    Jul 2003
    Posts
    84
    Mentioned
    0 Post(s)
    Tagged
    0 Thread(s)
    Reputation
    1 (x1)

    very nice but could you put for khorne instead of for tzeentch that would be the only criticism i have good job.

  4. #3
    Senior Member XV-88's Avatar
    Join Date
    Sep 2003
    Location
    In a fool's corner.
    Posts
    878
    Mentioned
    0 Post(s)
    Tagged
    0 Thread(s)

    Reputation
    1 (x2)

    Sorry, but I thought it was Tzeentch. The Fallen=Dark Angels Enemy=Tousand Sons=Worshippers of Tzeentch. See my thinking?
    Henceforth no man shall set foot upon the world, and all around shall be set sentinals to ward away unwary spacecraft. We must accept that this place is lost to us forever, and is now the eternal habitation of abomination.

    <div class='quotetop'>QUOTE</div><div class='quotemain'>another annoying thing i hate: 47,000 similies in one post. just thoght id throw that in there and see if anybody else hates it as much as i do.</div>

  5. #4
    Member arch_heretik's Avatar
    Join Date
    Jul 2003
    Posts
    84
    Mentioned
    0 Post(s)
    Tagged
    0 Thread(s)
    Reputation
    1 (x1)

    no not fallen angels just the fallen and i think the fallen angels are undivided but thats a diferent topic for a different time anyway thanx

  6. #5
    Senior Member XV-88's Avatar
    Join Date
    Sep 2003
    Location
    In a fool's corner.
    Posts
    878
    Mentioned
    0 Post(s)
    Tagged
    0 Thread(s)

    Reputation
    1 (x2)

    The Fallen=Thousand Sons=Worshippers of Tzeentch. Y&#39;know? Like Hunt the Fallen? Oh well. More fluff? Bring it on&#33;
    Henceforth no man shall set foot upon the world, and all around shall be set sentinals to ward away unwary spacecraft. We must accept that this place is lost to us forever, and is now the eternal habitation of abomination.

    <div class='quotetop'>QUOTE</div><div class='quotemain'>another annoying thing i hate: 47,000 similies in one post. just thoght id throw that in there and see if anybody else hates it as much as i do.</div>

  7. #6
    Senior Member
    Join Date
    Aug 2003
    Location
    england
    Posts
    994
    Mentioned
    0 Post(s)
    Tagged
    0 Thread(s)

    Reputation
    -3 (x0)

    here you go i need fluff for a character. usually i use deciever but he has said go to you because he is doing alot already.

    my liuetenant stuttgart. he is now second in command to colonel el&#39;johnsen. so i would like some fluff about what he was doing before that and how he made it to liutenant
    Want a website built to show off your miniatures? We recommend www.reaperwebdesign.co.uk

  8. #7
    LO Zealot Blood God's Avatar
    Join Date
    Sep 2003
    Location
    Ontario, Canada
    Posts
    1,216
    Mentioned
    0 Post(s)
    Tagged
    0 Thread(s)

    Reputation
    2 (x3)

    This is the information on my Army, Deciever wrote the story below, see what u can do if you want. I think it could make a great story if you are creative enough.

    Name :Akratils BloodRite&#33; (Black Templar)

    1 Emperors Champion Akratil MaliKhan
    1 Razor Back
    4 Tactical Squads (9 marines each)
    2 Veteran Squads (10 mariens each)
    2 Jump pack assault squads (9 marines each)
    2 Bike Squadrons
    1 Attack Bike Squadron
    12 Terminators
    2 Dreadnoughts
    2 Landraiders

    I have fought chaos, necrons, dark eldar, bood angels, Tau, Imperial Guard, and Orcs.


    Amongest the hardened forces of the Black Templar, there are many eager candidates for training and re-deployment to a unit of Grey Knights, those fanatical Inquisitors. Even the withdrawn and secretive Templar harbor, deep within their breast, a deep hate for the forces of Chaos. Every year, many recruits are inducted into the gleaming orders of the Ordo malleus. But what happens to those who don&#39;t quite make the cut? Those too fanatical and zealous even for the Inquisitors to take? Whispered rumors surround disappearances of especially fanatical Templar. One of the most famous rumors connects these dangerously zealous troops to a name out of a children&#39;s fairy tale: Akratail Malikhan. According to a legend told by the older Marines and passed along to each new generation of new recruits, Akratil was related to the Primarch of the Black Templars chapter. His exact relation changes with each telling, but one part of the telling remains unchanged: Akratil wanted to be Primarch. He organized a scheme to assassinate the current Primarch, but it was botched. His relative heard of Akratil&#39;s involvement, but, unable to stand ordering him killed, he put him in charge of the Blood Rite: Marines that were so zealous about Daemonhunting that they proved dangerous to their fellows, but were, for whatever reason, not inducted into the Ordo Malleus. These Marines are a crack fighting force, and not to be underestimated as "washouts." Akratil has single-handedly made them into a force that strikes fear into the hearts of the vile servants of Chaos wherever they are found. Recently, the Crusade from the Eye of Terror has plunged them into the thick of the fighting, battling Chaos troops, Orks, renegade Imperial Guard troops and Space Marines, Necrons, and Dark Eldar with equal abandon. They have even been involved in border skirmishes with the Tau empire. The Blood Rite is gaining fame rapidly, and was the turning point at the Battle of Sigma Sintiari, against the hordes of the Chaos Champion Vol-Guiyash, where their Terminators caught the opponents in a deft pincer movement, all but eradicating them. Akratil was famed as a tactical genius before his "fall," and if the rumors about him leading the Blood Rite are true, it is indeed a dark time for the foes of the Emperor.

    Lets see if you can do better Please, be as creative as you wish, try and make it a little longer, i like longer stories, because you have to have enough time to get into the story

  9. #8
    Senior Member
    Join Date
    Sep 2003
    Location
    Salem, Massachusetts, U.S.A.
    Posts
    857
    Mentioned
    0 Post(s)
    Tagged
    0 Thread(s)

    Reputation
    4 (x2)

    Ok, guys, he&#39;s at school. I can take one more contract, cause I got Master Belial done. I like Stuttgart, so after I do the Eldar thing I&#39;ll handle him.
    Si em, tow en can de lach.
    Tak&#33; Tak&#33; Tak ah wan, Tak a lah&#33;
    Mi tow, can de lach.
    Mi him, en tow.

  10. #9
    Senior Member XV-88's Avatar
    Join Date
    Sep 2003
    Location
    In a fool's corner.
    Posts
    878
    Mentioned
    0 Post(s)
    Tagged
    0 Thread(s)

    Reputation
    1 (x2)

    Dammit, school sucks&#33; Oh well, Deciver is starting school soon too, and he goes to a catholic school&#33; Tee-hee&#33; Well, kommissar, Deciver says he has ya, but I&#39;ll star elaborating on Deciver&#39;s description of Blood God&#39;s Templars.

    The blood of Tau still drained of the rune-encrusted blade of Akratil MaliKhan, Champion of Black Templar. Sounds of battle filled the air around him. With his advanced vision brought forth from years of practice, meditation and surgery, he saw many things. His Terminators were saturating the space in front of them with storm bolter fire, super heating the air and making it rise. The dead leaves that were scattered under the now-dead trees were swept up in the current, only to be cut to shreds moments later by bolts of deadly power. More than once he saw power fist rise, then come down, pounding out another voice from the chaos of explosions, engines straining and soldiers dying. The hiss of a super-charged rail from a Tau gun brought him from his trance, something he was now getting used to. Milliseconds later the hiss of vapourising water particles and the pugnant smell of burning hair filled his senses. He found his prey, set up for the attack, making sure the soon-to-be-deceased Tau gunner did not see him, and pounced. Realising they had been flanked by Akratil MaliKhan and his escort of assault marines, they momentarily flinched, giving precious time to the Templar. Akratil MaliKhan felt himself fall deep, deeper into his self, and let a mind-numbing rage take over, slashing through the Tau squad. It was times like these when he raged. Raged at the Grey Knights for not accepting him. Raged at the enemies of the emperor, why don&#39;t they realise how great He is? Raged at himself, for not keeping control of this insatiable anger, and wondering if he himself was possessed by the ultimate evil-daemons. He slashed right through some, ripping their Tau armour in half, instantly killing them. He got control of himself after every one of the Tau squad was dead. Every one. He stood still for a moment, then threw off his helmet and raged at the sky...

    The tactical squads were holding up quite nicely with their reinforcements of veterans and bike. However, soon catastrophe struck. A Tau Hammerhead gunship crested a hill, firing its Rail gun and side mounted rail carbines, streaking through both bike squadrons and severely damaging the Attack Bikes. The moral seemed to transfer from the Templar to the Tau with the appearance of this weapon of destruction. A second shot took out their Razorback, previously incapacitated, but continued as a bunker for a few marines. Not anymore. But nothing lasts forever. Answering the question of almost every Templar on the battlefield, the Hammerhead exploded violently, shaking the ground, and shrapnel knocked down some trees. The Land Raiders had arrived, with extras. Two dreadnoughts walked out of the mist and smoke. One with assault cannon, one with lascannons. Akratil MaliKhan did not have to, but heard others sigh of relief. He knew they were coming. He knew that the Tau were dead. But he also knew what came next...


    Well, what do you think? Constructive criticism appreciated. Compliments also appreciated. That is all for now, though&#33;
    Henceforth no man shall set foot upon the world, and all around shall be set sentinals to ward away unwary spacecraft. We must accept that this place is lost to us forever, and is now the eternal habitation of abomination.

    <div class='quotetop'>QUOTE</div><div class='quotemain'>another annoying thing i hate: 47,000 similies in one post. just thoght id throw that in there and see if anybody else hates it as much as i do.</div>

  11. #10
    Senior Member XV-88's Avatar
    Join Date
    Sep 2003
    Location
    In a fool's corner.
    Posts
    878
    Mentioned
    0 Post(s)
    Tagged
    0 Thread(s)

    Reputation
    1 (x2)

    Well... still waiting for input from kommissar and Blood God. Where are you, guys?
    Henceforth no man shall set foot upon the world, and all around shall be set sentinals to ward away unwary spacecraft. We must accept that this place is lost to us forever, and is now the eternal habitation of abomination.

    <div class='quotetop'>QUOTE</div><div class='quotemain'>another annoying thing i hate: 47,000 similies in one post. just thoght id throw that in there and see if anybody else hates it as much as i do.</div>

Closed Thread
Page 1 of 4 123 ... LastLast

Posting Permissions

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts