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Hi all, im a new to the games workshop scene, I never realised till i discovered this site that you could write your own fluff. so here goes, it six paragraph's, here three and ill post the next three at a later date.
oh, and endlish is a second language so if my grammer and spelling is off plz bear with me, thanks.
The Ultimi, Part one, The beginning.
The intercom flickered to life â€œyou may enter brother Isaakusâ€¦...â€? a deep resonant voice intoned. Slowly chaplain Isaakus made his way down the long hall; the walls were festooned with the seemingly endless battle honors of the ultramarines and its successor chapters. Deep in thought Isaakus ignored these, pausing only in front of the statue of his great Primach. â€œThough our enemies may rise against us, and threaten to overwhelm us, our beloved Emperorâ€™s guidance delivers us from their handsâ€? he whispered as he knelt and reverently kissed a talisman bearing the crest of the ultramarines that hung from his huge muscle bound shoulders.
â€œWelcome brother, it has been some time since last we metâ€?. Isaakus bowed low â€œfifty long years masterâ€? fifty long years in macragge Isaakus thought, fifty long years of instructing novices in the basic rites of incantation, prayer and oral traditions of Imperium. How his heart yearned for the song of battle. The shadowed face moved forward into the light, Isaakus noted the new scars on Marneusâ€™s old face. â€œWhat is it that you wanted Isaakus?â€? he gently questioned, with a furrowed brow and guarded expression.
â€œMaster, whilst on my sojourn in terra I was able to study many of the journals of ultramarines chaplains from ages pastâ€? Isaakus explained. â€œOne journal in particular caught my attention; it vaguely notes that a cache of amour and weapons was hidden on a small planet called Hamoalaâ€?. At this the Ultramarines masterâ€™s eyes pricked up, though the chapter was large and well supplied, amour and weapons were always a precious commodity. â€œAfter consulting many star and planetary maps I have been able to confirm the existence of Hamoalaâ€? Isaakusâ€™s voice strengthened as his confidence increased; â€œMaster, I humbly request the honor of traveling to Hamoala and investigating the â€˜raw potentialâ€™ this planet has to offerâ€?. The old warrior smiled down at Isaakus and uttered two simple words â€œPermission Granted"
Feel free to say any thing you want about this peice.... i know its not great. thats why i need your input cheers
This is very cool, as ultramarines related stuff goes.
Make it Macragge rather than Terra, though, since that's the Ultramarines home world.
Ooh.. and for some more incentive, add some antagonists who are also looking for this cache. You could pick an opponent you routinely fight against, or just make up something like a chaos cult who could use the advanced weapons to take over the planet.
Otherwise, it's very funky. Keep writing.
Damn! you gave away the next episode lolOriginally posted by The_Giant_Mantis@Jan 23 2005, 12:48
Ooh.. and for some more incentive, add some antagonists who are also looking for this cache. You could pick an opponent you routinely fight against, or just make up something like a chaos cult who could use the advanced weapons to take over the planet.[snapback]309672[/snapback]