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heres part one of a story im working on with the idea that "my enemys enemy is my friend"
Tell me if you enjoy it or anything that needs working on
Dale was dreaming........of his homeworld.....of his dad and mom......of the day he joined the guard..........BAM! What was that he thought? Dale slowly opened his eyes and then he remembered where he was.
He was fighting on a world called.....thinking about it he didnt even know. This made him laugh out load "Hahahaha" his voice ecoed around the ship. He looked around the ship then tryed to move but found himself tied up by the wall. Something moved to his right, he looked round and saw one of the enemy tied up on the right of him. A tai was it? no not that. tau that was it, a tau still in his blue amour.
That was the enemy that attcked whatever world he was on, they were after the citys power plant so his platoon was sent to fight them off. Didnt go so well when these raiders came along and started riping us apart. At lest they did a number on the tau too. Wont be getting any more problems from them any time soon he thought, but now he had new problems.
"Shar... troes.." the tau mumbled. "what? you talking to me xeno?" the tau said nothing eles.
Lucky bastard was still out of it he guessed with no worrys yet, that would change.
"HAYYY" he called out "Sarge!" no answer came back. He tryed to loosen the ropes binding his arms but couldnt, just then the ship took a turn and he slamed into the floor "BAM" he felt hot pain from his chest "aarrrr dam it" "shart eret erth" the tau was talking agen and now he was up with his back agenst the wall "just hit my back xeno, no need for concern"
The tau was still looking at him when a warrior walked through the door.
"Whats all the talking in here? slaves need not talk" the warroir who walled in was tall and slim with spikey black armour and his on his head he had small cold eyes and his hair was tied bihind his back and moved from side to side as he walked into the room. dark elder he thought to himself. As evil as they come.
"No talking slaves or would you like me to cut your tounge out?" dale didnt say anything but the tau mumbled something but didnt even have time to finish whatever he was saying when the elder kicked him hard in the cheat "Aaarrr" the tau said in pain.
"SHUT UP MAGGOT" and kicked him again, ha i almost feel sorry for the xeno.
Seems that the elder was having fun as he had his full attention fixed on the sounds of pain comeing from the tau fire warroir. Could i kick his lags out dale thought to himself? what if he falls away from me? what will happen to ,no what will he do to me if i fail?
I souldnt risk it, but is it ture what i have heard about them, the arenas, the torcher chambers? If yes then this could be my only shot at geting out of this hell hole.
"Had enough yet tau?" The elder seemed to bleed out the words one by one to make it as painful as possible.
He kicked out as hard as he could at the elders legs and droped him to the floor of the ship with a BAMM! then he quickly wrapped his legs around his neck and squeezed with all his strength "Die you basted, just DIE!"
"You wronnn.n...nn" The elder said weakly and with the last of his strength dale snapped his neck with a loud crack and then the warroirs body went limp and stoped moving.
He could still hear the engines of the ship roaring outside and hoped that the noice covered the sounds of the struggle, if not he was sure he would fine out soon.
A few minutes pased and no one came "Thank the emperor, now i just need to get these dam ropes off"
The tau at this point was looking at the dead elder and then back at him, dale guessed it was because of his armour that he recovered so fast"
Lucky him dale thought to himself as all he got when he joined up was a lasgun and some old armour with blood stains and a hole in the chest plate.
"Tares artt tressart" he said and pointed at the ropes tieing his hands. "What? My ropes? You want to help me tau?"
What a joke, a xeno trying to help me when only a little whlie ago they were fighting and killing each other.
"Tares artt tressart" he said for the second time still pointing at his ropes with his blue armoured hand.
Blue, sounded better then tau "Ok blue what now?"
There you have it, any feedback welcome
Last edited by KOS-MOS; July 24th, 2006 at 17:17.
its good, hope to seem more soon
a few spelling errors, but thats ok
What do you mean spelling errors? I can spell Tau!
Only jokeing i suck at spelling but im glad you like it
It was really good. I like it
I'll go out on a wild goose chase here if you don't mind.