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hi guys this is posted on my blog so heres the link
give me some c&c on it thanks
Not too bad, I think, but it does sound very close to Salamander fluff. You might be better off changing a few things here and there, just to distinguish your self.
This thread also could do with a healthy move to 40k fluff, it'll get more hits there, I assure you.
As Adrian MalSeraph stated... I thought I was reading the Salamnders fluff... but considering the fact they are a successor chapter of same colour and Combat Doctrines then you can't make too many changes...
Their organization resembles the Black templars or it is just me? Novices and all...
Thanks to all the people showing faith in me
I sometimes feel that everyone will leave me and they will be on their own...