[slorak]

First off I just wanted to say this is a sharp looking figure. You have done an excellent job of defining the different parts of the figure. I like the overall darker grey tone of this figure moreso than your previous test model.

I really like the look of this model and you should end up with a stellar looking unit/army when done.

As for a list of things to do if you had more time. This is what I would suggest:

The gold lettering on the weapon casing looks like it runs together. This could be the angle but if not I would suggest a brown or purple ink to better define the letters and separate them from the background.

I would take the highlights up a notch on the red of the purity seals and Inquisitor symbols.

I would subdue the silver on the weapon. This could be done by starting with a darker metallic and/or glazing with inks. Different color inks will give you a different feel. Vallejo Smoke works very well for this.

Cheers,

-Mike