Thread: Dark Hands Chapter Fluff (long!)
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Old April 21st, 2006, 03:09   #2 (permalink)
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Nice, I'm really getting the 'barbarian' vibe, though I think you could have taken it further.

Nonetheless, the fluff is very awesome. An idea would be to add some info on the leading figures and characters in the chapter, just so we get an idea of what they're like.
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