What does everyone think of my army fluff.

Since Albion is based on Great Britain, and Bretonnian is also kind of (France, with British Arthurian stuff). My army revolves around this. It is lead by the son of Louen leoncouer, Prince Leinad, who is King of Albion. He is the third bretonnian king, and the first to be born there. They colonised Albion after a Grail knight was told that The lady of the lake was from there. They are a bretonnian army, but there is plenty of potential for damsels who are female druids, and other things like that.