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hello i have made a dwarf storyline for my dwarvish army and i just want to know if its realistic/ok? so here it is.
High in the Black Mountains above Karak Hirn there is a small Dwarf Throng led by the famous dwarf lord Alaric Stormbeard, He is the cousin of the great Grombrindal of the mountains and he is almost as old. The old dwarf started out as an orphan in Karak Hirn, when he was old enough he became a dwarf warrior in the army of Karak Hirn until he became restless with this and became a miner. Whilst a miner he found that deep within him a connection with the mountains and a calling to the Black Mountains he decided to consult the lord of Karak Hirn for advice, the lord told him to take a small group of followers to this place and find what it is that is calling him. So he and a group of followers some from the engineering guild set out on this quest. He quested along the mountains with his followers until he found an ancient dwarf town carved solidly out of the mountain, it had been ravaged by the wicked beast men and ogres. Many of these fowl creatures still lived in the abandoned town fighting for supremacy. Deep with in him Alaric felt a great hatred he then new that this was his birth place and where he had been left with this thought he rushed into battle to kill all in his way. The Thunderers from the engineering guild loaded their handguns and let rip from above while the warriors rushed in to help their fellow dwarf. Many dwarves died and all hope seemed lost for Alaric when from over the peaks of the mountains they saw the bright ginger hair of the slayers coming to their aid. With the help of these brave warriors they fended of the Beast Men and ogres and forced them to reteat. The battle was won but they had paid for it with many lives. The small dwarf force decided to create a new city in the remnants of the old town. They elected Alaric to be there lord and the lord of their new city. Because of the Alaric's long white beard and the ferocity of him in battle the decided to name him Alaric Stormbeard and high lord of Karak Karnurn. The dwarf colours are green and white to show their roots from Karak Hirn. Now entering its 200th century the city is thriving with many dwarves immigrating there. The throng has many inns as it is so close to Bugman's Brewery it is always busy. The great Alaric Stormbeard is still the lord of Karak Karnurn and leads his people with complete strength. He has a bodyguard of iron breakers to show his life as a miner, his son is one of the current Thanes of the city and is called Bjorn the Mad due to his suicidal tendencies in battle. The army also has a shrine to the slayers who died all those years ago where many Slayers come to visit including the great Malakai Makansion who often lends his services for a price of course. Now in his 300th century Alaric Stormbeard has become interested in the secrets of runes and has employed a rune smith by the name of Grimbold the wise he creates many of the lord and his sons weapons for battle as well as teaching the secrets of runes to Alaric. The two often go to battle together with the slayers from the shrine and many loyal Thunderers from the Cities engineering guild. It is a formidable force and is one of the bravest in the land. It often helps the bretonnians just north of their border, especially as these manlings donâ€™t know the right end of and axe from the wrong one (and donâ€™t get me started in there shoddy building work.)
Remeber men, we are fighting for the ladies honour, which is a damsite more than she did
Great story line, I hope you write a full story......maybe in several chapters even? If you'd like I could help you edit out some of the spelling and/or punctuation bugs when you write the story, just get into contact with me when u want some input!
Looking forward to reading more,
W/L/DMoria Goblins: 1/6/0
I Guess that means dont trust my advice when it comes to strategy and such :p