EDIT: Some point values have been removed to do GW Copyright. See the Army List Posting Rules (http://www.librarium-online.com/forums/fb-armies/80816-army-list-posting-rules.html) for more information. -Spector

The Green Knight

The Dolorous Blade, Heavy Armour, Shield, Barding, Spirit Form, Immune to Psychology, Terror, Ethereal, Blessing of the Lady, Gaurdian of the Sacred Sights, Aura of The Fey, The Shadow Steed

Paladin - 126

Grail Vow, Hand Weapon, Heavy Armour, Lance, Shield on a Bretonnian Warhorse with Virtue of Joust
(With Grail Knights)

Paladin - 109

Knight's Vow, Hand Weapon on a Bretonnian Warhorse with Virtue of Ideal

Damsel - 120

Level 1 Wizard on a Bretonnian Warhorse with Silver Mirror

Damsel - 110

Level 1 Wizard with Silver Mirror

9 - Knights of the Realm - 265

Knight's Vow, Hand Weapon, Lance, Shield and Heavy Armour on a Bretonnian Warhorse with Gallant, Musician and Standard Bearer with Banner of Chalons

9 - Knights of the Realm - 265

Knight's Vow, Hand Weapon, Lance, Shield and Heavy Armour on a Bretonnian Warhorse with Gallant, Musician and Standard Bearer with Banner of Chalons

20 - Peasant Bowmen - 125

Peasant's Vow, Hand Weapon, Longbow, Defensive Stakes with a Villien

3 - Pegasus Knight

Knight's Vow, Hand Weapon, Lance, Shield and Heavy Armour on Pegasus' with Gallant

10 - Mounted Yeoman - 160

Peaseant's Vow, Hand Weapon, Spear, Bow and Shields on Horses

8 - Grail Knights

Grail Vow, Hand Weapon, Lance, Shield and Heavy Armour on Bretonnian Warhorse's

The overall look of the list I like. Grail Knights are very expensive, id look at dropping those down to 6, to be used in a single rank.
Also both Damsels cannot have the Silver Mirror, you can only have 1 of each magic item (except Dispel Scrolls and Power Stones)
Split the Mtd Yeoman in two, and run 2 units of 5. Being Fast Cav they are great tactically, especially in an all mounted list.
Make the Bowmen Skirmishers. Throw Braziers on there and FC is something to look at too as pesant banner losses dont give Vpts.
Finally, look at adding a 9 Strong Lance, or 6 strong single rank, of Errantry with FC and their banner. Id also say drop a Knight or two from the KotR units so the Characters fit in there nicely.

Alright, lets take a look:

-The Green Knight is a solid Lord choice, but if you're looking for a more competitive list, I'd suggest going with a Bretonnian Lord instead as in my opinion, he offers a bit more punch than the Green Knight. Personally, I think the Green Knight is an ideal 2nd Lord in a 3k point game or a great Lord for less competitve 2k games.

-Do you really need more hitting power in the Grail Knight unit? I'd drop the Grail Vow off the Paladin and stick him in one of your Knight of the Realm units to add some hitting power to them.

-As Deceiver stated, you can't have duplicates of magic items with the exception of Power Stones and Dispel Scrolls.

-The Bowmen would likely be better off as skirmishers. It gives them better protection from shooting and more flexibility. Also, drop the Villien, as he only really offers you bonuses in close combat, where you really don't want your bowmen.

-The Mounted Yeomen would be better off in 2 units of 5. It gives you much more flexibility. Also since one of the best uses for fast cav is to use them as charge bait, you don't want to lose 10 of them to getting run down when fleeing from a charge.

-The Grail Knight unit is big and expensive, be prepared for people to be gunning for it early and often.

Also you really don't have to list default items and abilities for units if you don't want to. You can assume that everyone knows what the standard gear and ability sets are for each character/unit if you like. Up to you.