2000 Competitive Mech (SoB take one)

[GAX70]

well this is my first sob list and was hopeing to get sum feed back and tips that im in dyer need of. ps. sorry that the list is not abbreviated this is how i make a list to take with me to a game.

HQ-222pts

Canoness-#1-121pts.
(Blessed Weapon, Book of St.Lucius, Cloak of St.Aspira, Jump Pack, Frag Grenades,)

Canoness-#1-101pts.
(Power Weapon, Book of St.Lucius, Cloak of St.Aspira, Jump Pack, Frag Grenades,)


Troops-816pts.

Battle Sister Squad-#10-204pts.
(x2Flamer, Combi-bolterflamer, Rhino, Extra Armour, Smoke Launchers,)

Battle Sister Squad-#10-204pts.
(x2Flamer, Combi-bolterflamer, Rhino, Extra Armour, Smoke Launchers,)

Battle Sister Squad-#10-204pts.
(x2Flamer, Combi-bolterflamer, Rhino, Extra Armour, Smoke Launchers,)

Battle Sister Squad-#10-204pts.
(x2Flamer, Combi-bolterflamer, Rhino, Extra Armour, Smoke Launchers,)

Fast Attack-528pts.

Seraphin Spuad-#8-176pts.
(x2Hand Flamer,)

Seraphin Spuad-#8-176pts.
(x2Hand Flamer,)

Seraphin Spuad-#8-176pts.
(x2Hand Flamer,)


Heavy Support420pts

Exorcist-#1-140pts.
(Extra Armour,)

Exorcist-#1-140pts.
(Extra Armour,)

Exorcist-#1-140pts.
(Extra Armour,)

---1986pts---

[Epidemic4774]

well this is my first sob list and was hopeing to get sum feed back and tips that im in dyer need of. ps. sorry that the list is not abbreviated this is how i make a list to take with me to a game.

HQ-222pts

Canoness-#1-121pts.
(Blessed Weapon, Book of St.Lucius, Cloak of St.Aspira, Jump Pack, Frag Grenades,)
I would take a master-crafted eviserator instead because it pretty much does what the blessed weapon does, allows you to instant kill enemy commanders, pop tanks, as well as engage MC. With a blessed weapon she really doesnt have that many attacks and has a poor weapon skill so the things you will want to send her aganists would be the things that I listed. Here is what I do with my cannoness if I go jumpack build

Cannoness - master crafted eviserator, cloack, jump pack, mantle of ophelia, and book. That gives a heroine that can be S8 master craft, 2+ invul and immune to first instant death wound.
Canoness-#1-101pts.
(Power Weapon, Book of St.Lucius, Cloak of St.Aspira, Jump Pack, Frag Grenades,)
See above( I think that a second canoness is a bit excessive)

Troops-816pts.

Battle Sister Squad-#10-204pts.
(x2Flamer, Combi-bolterflamer, Rhino, Extra Armour, Smoke Launchers,)
I am assuming that there is a vet in there so she should have the book of st. Lucius confering that stubborn Ld 9. Also you would be better off with 1 flamer and 1 heavy flamer its only another 6 points and its better.
Battle Sister Squad-#10-204pts.
(x2Flamer, Combi-bolterflamer, Rhino, Extra Armour, Smoke Launchers,)

Battle Sister Squad-#10-204pts.
(x2Flamer, Combi-bolterflamer, Rhino, Extra Armour, Smoke Launchers,)

Battle Sister Squad-#10-204pts.
(x2Flamer, Combi-bolterflamer, Rhino, Extra Armour, Smoke Launchers,)

Fast Attack-528pts.

Seraphin Spuad-#8-176pts.
(x2Hand Flamer,)
The vets should have the book and if you have the points left over I would give them melta bombs or upgrade the vet with and eviserator.
Seraphin Spuad-#8-176pts.
(x2Hand Flamer,)

Seraphin Spuad-#8-176pts.
(x2Hand Flamer,)


Heavy Support420pts

Exorcist-#1-140pts.
(Extra Armour,)
extra armor is usually not needed for exorcist as you want them to be shooting all the time and all it does is instead cant move cant shoot it makes it so you only cant shoot which defeats the purpose of the exorcist.
Exorcist-#1-140pts.
(Extra Armour,)

Exorcist-#1-140pts.
(Extra Armour,)

---1986pts---
Your army is fine but in my opinion a little dry and lacks variety.

[The Prince of Excess]

Pretty much agree with everything Epidemic said. I'm a fan of the Blessed Weapos, let's her kill troops a little more efficiently but it depends on what you use her for. Both are solid Canoness builds.

I'd go easy on the Seraphim and buy more SoB, at least one more Rhino mounted unit. 4 Troops in a competitive list is a good number and it'll give you more Rhinos to block the leftover Seraphim from guns. One big unit of Seraphim with Flamers can have CC duty and a smaller unit with Infernos can have tank busting duty, plus they can assault what falls out. Also try to use as close to your maximum points as possible, there's always something worth adding.