2250 Dark Elves - First army in fantasy

[dink4221]

Please be honest (pick it a part) This is my first attempt to make a fantasy army. All feedback will be appreciated!!!

Master: 256
- Ring of Hotek
- Dagger of Hotek
- Null Talisman x 2

Dragon: 320

Sorceress: 197
+ Dark Steed
- Level 2, +1 Dispel Dice
+1 Power Dice

Sorceress: 197
+ Dark Steed
- Level 2, +1 Dispel Dice
+1 Power Dice

920
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Core:

12 Dark Elf Warriors: 124
+ Lordling, Musician, Standard Bearer
- War banner

20 Corsairs: 235
+ Standard Bearer, Sea Serpent (frenzy)

4 Dark Riders (with Sorceress): 68

4 Dark Riders (with Sorceress): 68

495
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Special:

5 Cold One Knights: 227
+ Dread, Standard Bearer
- S Slaughter
- Dread: Crimson Death

Cold One Chariot: 100

Cold One Chariot: 100
427
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Rare:

War Hydra: 185
- Eternal Hatred, Terror

War Hydra: 185
- Eternal Hatred, Terror

370
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[Intrepid]

Why don't you like our core choices? If you're trying for a Many Small Units army then trading a Chariot or two for Crossbowmen would be more productive. Chariots and Hydras have about the same purpose.

I think the Sorceresses will not be protected in such small units. It's not hard to shoot down a 5-model light cav unit. Medium to large blocks of Warriors would provide much better protection and free up your Dark Riders to do light cav duties (like flank charges) instead of escort.

I think the Dragon is a bit much at this point level. Is your general really a Master not a Dreadlord? As a Master he's overbudget on artifacts...and naked, apparently. You may get better results (with much fewer points) with a Dreadlord on Cold One, joining the Knights.