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    This is a little story about IG that i have been adding to for some time, i finally thought it was time to put it on LO for others to read.

    PART 1
    THE UNEXPECTED ALLIANCE!

    Colonel Wolfe rose from the muddy floor of the trenches, it had been two hours since the mortar fire had stopped.
    He rose to a low crouch and climbed onto the firestep, he peered over the wall of slime and mud and glanced across the river into the woods.
    There was the sharp crack of lasfire and the Colonel dived backwards off the firestep as mud splattered everywhere.
    "There's no chance we'll get out of here sir!" exclaimed Corporal Evans as he scrambled over to the Colonel.
    The Colonel raised himself from the mud and wiped his face, "Has there been any word of reinforcements?"
    "No Colonel, we can only pick up static and a strange sound, its faint but its there."
    The Colonel nodded and clambered back to the dug-out and prepared to wait for the attackers to come to them.

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    I am so shocked by this. Ahh. This was two days ago and there is still no more here? Hurry up writing some more, or I will remain shocked for the rest of my life.
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    carry on, its a promising start, I wonder whos firing at them?

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    Suddenly without warning a mercenery ship flew overhead with heavy bolters blazing furisously at the enemy.
    The Colonel scrambled up onto the firestep and watched as the heretic Guardsmen were cut down by a tremendous hail of fire.
    He jumped out of the trench and turned to face his men.
    "MEN OF ENERTIA, YOU ARE NOT COWARDS, FOR THE EMPEROR&#33;" he cried as him and his command squad ran towards the river and to death or glory.

    After the intial charge the men were soon involved in a gruelling close combat.
    The Colonel had just finished off a Guardsman when he truned to see a heretic luitenant rush towards him.
    "For the gods of Chaos&#33;" he bellowed as he drew his chainsword high.
    "I think not you *****&#33;" screamed the Colonel as he lunged out with his power sword.
    He drove it straight into the Luitenents chest.
    As it fizzled through his flak armour he splurted blood over the Colonel.
    "Chaos will......never.................die&#33;" he gasped as he dropped to his knees and then fell to the floor in a puddle of blood.
    "Colonel&#33;"
    Colonel Wolfe spun round to see a guardsman being beat down with a heretic Guardsman&#39;s Lasgun.
    He ran over and dived as another Guardsman took a swipe at his legs, he rolled and jumped back into a standing position before swiping downwards furiously towards the heretic.
    "There is no redemption for traitors&#33;" he gasped as he withdrew the sword and wiped it clean.
    The Colonel soon noticed that it was not only his men that were fighting, there were Dark Eldar warriors who were also cutting down the hertics they faced.
    When the last traitor had fallen the Colonel fell down on a pile of bodies closed his eyes and took three deep breaths.
    Only two of his command squad had survived along with a dozen or so troops.
    It had been a hard fought battle and was a devastating loss for the Emperor&#39;s armies.
    When the Colonel opened his eyes he noticed there was a Dark Eldar stood over him........................................................................ .
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    More we need more damn you.
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    &quot;Thats the one&quot;</span>

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    The Colonel knew now that he&#39;d put himself at a great disadvantage, there he was with a Dark Eldar Sybarite stood over him and he&#39;d relinquished his weapons.
    The Sybarite held out his hand. "Get up great warrior, we need to talk."

    The Colonel sat eating what seemed to taste somewhat like a Mars bar. He and the Sybarite were talking about the Tau in the general area.
    "We have heard of your great soldiers, The 21st Enertia Fusiliers, we would like to know if you can offer us your help?"
    "Technically that would class me and my men as traitors and we&#39;d be killed as soon as we set foot back on Imperial soil."
    "I realised this and that is why i hired a man to infiltrate your Imperium and plan your travel to Enertia IV."
    The Colonel considered this and thought of the poor man who could have been killed for traitorism against the Emperor when he was found out.
    "So what would you like us to do?"
    "We aren&#39;t asking for an alliance, more of a....erm......mutual agreement that you&#39;ll help us with our Tau problem."
    "And what will the Imperium gain from it?"
    "We will be willing to house you and your men, but we will also provide you with a new substance that we have found, it is because of this substance that the Tau have attacked us. We call it SPICE (ED NOTE: Yes i did get this idea of the story from the Dune movie&#33 and it is one of the most powerful substances that we have ever come across, and only we know of it."
    The Colonel considered this, of all the planets in the entire Imperium why wouldn&#39;t anyone from the Imperial Guard or the Adeptus Astartes come accross it?................
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    As the DE&#39;s small ship blasted away from the planet and breached the warp the Colonel began to become a little suspicious of Devon.
    "So how come its only you who knows about this SPICE?" he questioned.
    "We have only recently found it ourselves but it seems to harness immense weaponry power."
    The Colonel walked throught to the cockpit and watched as the ship re-entered normal space and came into orbit of Enertia IV.
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    *claps his hands*
    first you are in crap when i see you next for niking a name

    second the story is relly good and wolfe is the germany spelling right?
    3rd i think the mods will let you off fo sering in a story becuse it is in a book and not to a meber

    4th when is the next part goner be
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    nice description. However, there was one part that made me laugh, and im not sure if you used it as subtle humour or you actually took it seriously, the part in the second piece where it says that Wolfe stabs the heretic lieutenant, the lieutenant says "Chaos....will never.....die" or something corny like that. Dont do that again, a chaos guy would either scream like a pig or flail anxiously to inflict some sort of wound on the enemy, or a pull out a &#39;nade and take him down with him. youre a very good author with much, much promise. But dont use corny lines like that again. Please accept this as constructive criticism, not flaming.

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    I think that he was trying to empathise a dieing mans last breath is with his god (or gods in the case of chaos) but the power sword part was cool and the so called corny line makes it better because you now that guy was an ass**** so he ant around to say that line again
    and the outher thing i whant to ask is when are you put ing up the next part lone wolf
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