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    Here are some characters I'm thinking of using in a story but wondered if they were a little too 'buffed up' if you know what I mean, so here they are for you to rate.

    Private Stienreich-A hard nosed guardsman who'd stare death in the face, laugh, then come back for more.

    Private Bergreich-A relatively new recruit but with a good amount of knowledge regarding tactics and warfare.

    Private Bergstien-A veteran of many battles who has the potential to go much higher but prefers to break in new recruits and transform them into decent guardsmen.

    Sergeant Reichstien-A skilled veteran of the Imperium who has served for many years and has never faltered under immense pressure.

    Are these characters any good and should I use them in my story?
    I also wouldn't mind a partner for this story if anyone's interested.

    EDIT: See here for partnership details...


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    The characters sound good, but, I would heavily reccomend changing the names...

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    Originally posted by SomethingWicked@Jun 9 2004, 189
    The characters sound good, but, I would heavily reccomend changing the names...
    Why? And to what???

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    Just, the names all sound the same or all are very similar, and will be difficult Differentiating them during the story.

    Mad Props to Angel_of_Rust for the sig.

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    Originally posted by Xaero@Jun 10 2004, 06:17
    Just, the names all sound the same or all are very similar, and will be difficult Differentiating them during the story.
    So should I just call them names like Bob, Pete, David, etc,etc?

    Because I thought they had 'old style' names back then?

    Maybe you could give me some name ideas.

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    Reich, berg, and stein are the only 3 parts, people will definitely get confused, plus it is uncreative and people will frown upon that. Here, try these names:

    keep stienreich
    keep bergstien

    2: new names

    Von Rasmussen
    Charkov

    I like those two names...but thats just me, you at least need to come up with two others...that dont have reich, berg, or stien in them. Try a von, that is very IGish.

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    How about Gunther Von Meckleberg?

    Thats one of the Special characters in my tabletop army.

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    exactly

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