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The rocket smashed through the door, splintering it into several pieces as if the fury of the emperor was behind it. “Redeem yourself son’s of the emperor for you have failed,? screeched cardinal Krishkov. The eight penal legion advanced. Lasguns blazing, as they charged into the Traitors fortress. Leading the 9th regiment was captain Hegegroves, having taken over after general-brigadier Thomson had been badly wounded by a volley of hellguns. Burning his face and fracturing his jaw, he had been taken away by the orderlies. The lasguns smashed several holes on the walkway but only 4 traitors fell. Once again the cardinal cried out “men of hadecha keep faith, these traitors have left the emperors light, they have denied their own right to the truth. They have no right to life, and it is your duty as servants to the imperium to end these foul traitors lives!?. Jenkins and redburn had already been killed and several other members of the regiment were wounded and they had yet to take the walls. Firing another volley at the traitors Hegegroves pulled out his chain sword and with a cry off for the emperor plunged into the traitors...

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