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    INTRODUCTION
    On Feris the planet of the space wolves a baby was born to Sargen BloodWolf.
    see the babys father was in the wolfguard retinue of logan grimmnar.
    sargen the father of Corgun was on campaign with grimnar and as a heretic sniper fired at grimnar and sargen jumped in the way of the bullet and took the fatal blow. now at this point sargens wife was at fang and was worried because the baby corgun was taken by a femalewolf who lost her pup to an rival pack and sargens friends helped find the baby but it was no were to be found and the baby was nowere to be found.


    FIVE YEARS LATER

    "Gullen, hey Gullen" called svor,
    "What svor!!" replied Gullen Hastly.
    "Are you actualy going out to hunt a wolf pack " said Svor quickly walking over to Gullen.
    "yeah i realy want to cause if i do i'll probly get our pack premoted to grey hunters" replied Gullen with pride.
    "good luck" Svor shouts as Gullen walks out of fang and into wilderness.
    as Gullen realisation that he might be facing death he hesetates to turn around
    but his glory mungering is to big to be thrown aside.

    Gullen finds a nice empty cave to rest because of a day of walking in the wilderness of fenris

    I NEED SUGGESTION FOR WERE TO GO CAUSE I GOT WRITERS BLOCK!!!


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    I am not sure if this is a parody or unintentionally dire.
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    I don't really get the story line. And do you mean the SM have wifes and kids?? That would be new.
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    Uhm, you know most space marines are cloned, and most space marines don&#39;t have the right tools, or tools that work properly, to do the nesary actions of having a child.
    In short, sms don&#39;t have the mark of stuff and don&#39;t have familys

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    Are you trying to make fun of GW-type writing, or are you that bad? That story is uh....well...shall we say...not very good.

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    ok ill redo it then



    but explain why ragnar was requited by space wolves when he was like near death or somthing like that and space wolves requit&#33;&#33;&#33;


    sorry for da spelling

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    the only problem i have is with ULTRAMARINES I HATE ULTRAMARINES

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