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    well, this is my first story, and is also coming off the top of my head. i have no idea what this is going to be about right yet.

    Oh, and this is based on my army, which is renegade IG on an almost-forge world

    Andon looked to the left, and saw nothing but blackness. he looked to the right and saw only the masses of his army and their Tau allies. the left was disturbing. "well, that probably was never witnessed before." he said to his commander standing next to him. "Yes, you are probably right. a feild that bends light around it to create total darkness, and that points all direction finders twards the middle... they will stay in there." "shut down the generators! and be prepared to fire!" andon said into the com-link of his Titan. the blackness flickered and died, making the Black Templars and the Cadian regiment vivsible again. the first one to fire was the Dreadnaught marked as Emilios the Invincible. it's plasma cannon fored at the titan and the bolt was deflected by the PWD-1 screens that the Reaveanites had developed, because they had an abundace of plasma weapons, and their tau allies had helped them create a plasma specific sheild. andon fired the 4 plasma cannons and the 2 lascannons at the enemy Shadowsword, which exploded and the turret flew off and landed in front of a speeding rhino, which ran into it. the other shadowsword turned twards andon's titan and fired. the void sheild absorbed the shot but went down in a shower of sparks from the console. "This is Helios Alpha to Lance Control. Initiate strike. over." "Helios Alpha, this is Lance Control, copy that" before the words were over the speaker the Lance satelites started to fire with pinpoint accuracy that was far surpassing any before. in moments the enemy was in shambles, and the hundred basilisks finished them off. "well, it worked better than expected. i think i'll call it the Hellfire feild"

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    anyone?
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    Hey Andon, good to see your getting in the story mood too, you&#39;ll have to write my bedtime stories of carnage for me next .

    Anyway first things first before &#39;equizatore&#39; comes along I think your gonna need to watch out with your capitals, but your spelling isen&#39;t too bad. To be honest I coulden&#39;t really understand what was going on, but don&#39;t worry that&#39;s expected in such a short pieace. I think it has potential for you to continue (if you wanted to of course) try getting a few notes or a synopsis down first before you start so at least you&#39;ll know where you&#39;r going with it. Otherwise I think if you slightly expand on this already written pieace, with a few more patches of detail (although don&#39;t overdue it in an action scence since it tends to dull everything down then) it would be a worth while read. Hope that helps. Nice work Andon.

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    thanks alot&#33; i&#39;ll do that. but now my spare time is going to be consumed with flight simulator 2004 (getting in 2 hours), rpg maker, warhammer 40k(of course), and other random things. probably not going to do to much writing at one time.
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