2000pt Newbie list, wanna go Tournament

[Sadface]

Hey all,

I am new to Bretonnain, and need much help. The last 3 matches I have played in I have lost and I know there is something wrong beacuse I know people win with Bretonnian all the time, so here is my list maybe you can find my main problems and help me out. (I'd appreciate it alot!)

Lords
Lord-235
Lance
Shield
Warhorse
Birthsword
Great Helm
Virtue of Audacity

Heroes
Paladin-160
Battle Standard Bearer
Lance
Shield
Warhorse
Virtue of Duty
Valora Standard

Damsel-130
Warhorse
Dispel Scrollx2

Damsel-115
Dispel Scroll
Chalice

Core
Peasant Bowmen x10 -70
Skirmisher


Knights of the Realmx5 -144
Full Command

Knights of the Realmx5 -144
Full Command

Knights of the Realmx7 -192
Full Command

Knights of the Realmx7 -192
Full Command

Knights Errantx5 -141
Full Command
Errantry Banner

Special
Questing Knightsx5 -167
Full Command

Rare
Grail Knightsx5 -220
Full Command

Field Trebuchet -90

The Lord is on the the Knights of the Realmx7, and the Paladin is in the other. The Damsel on horseback goes into the Grail knight unit. I usually try to put my bowmen on one flank then the Trebuchet on the other and shoot everything so that the enemy funnels into the middle where all my knights are. I support my KotR with a unit of 5 KotR and either the KE or the QK.
This army is exactly 2000 points, seems like alot fo units maybe the tactic I employ or how I use them is wrong.

[Phoenix]

Looks decent. Some Mounted Yeomen, i.e fast cav, may be useful. Also the 8 Strong Lances, i think id say run all MSU, with units of 6 Knights total (inc chars) and run them in one rank.

[Sadface]

sorry for asking but whats MSU?

[Phoenix]

Oh, sorry, no worries. It stands for Multiple Small Unit.

[Sadface]

So something like this would be better?

Lords
Lord-235
Lance
Shield
Warhorse
Birthsword
Great Helm
Virtue of Audacity

Heroes
Paladin-160
Battle Standard Bearer
Lance
Shield
Warhorse
Virtue of Duty
Valora Standard

Damsel-130
Warhorse
Dispel Scrollx2

Damsel-115
Dispel Scroll
Chalice

Core
Peasant Bowmen x10 -70
Skirmisher


Knights of the Realmx5 -144
Full Command

Knights of the Realmx5 -144
Full Command

Knights of the Realmx6 -168
Full Command

Knights of the Realmx6 -168
Full Command

Knights Errantx6 -161
Full Command
Errantry Banner

Special
Questing Knightsx6 -195
Full Command

Rare
Grail Knightsx5 -220
Full Command

Field Trebuchet -90

Ok so this way its still 2000pts and all the lances are 6's now and I will run them in one rank lines, the Characters will run with the 3 units that have 5 (Lord in KotR, Pally in KotR, and Damsel in Grail knights)

[p0lak]

the only problem with this many small units would be youll run out of room on the table and will be running urself into yourself so id sugguest to make lance formation of 9 strong so u can more easily manouver just a tip