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    Tournament Word Bearers 2000pts

    Constructive Criticism Please

    HQ 281
    Lord Zoltan MOCU, Infiltrate, Acursed Crozius, D Strength, CCW

    Great Unclean One Gift of Chaos

    Elites 470
    9 Chosen of Zoltan MOCU, Infiltrate, 3 Flamers, Daemon Icon, AC - Daemon Chains

    3 Obliterators

    Troops 621
    10 Marines MOCU, Boltguns, 2 Plasma Guns, AC - Power Fist

    10 Marines MOCU, Boltguns, 2 Plasma Guns, AC - Power Fist

    15 Daemonettes Damonic Talons, Warp Scream (In Daemon Icon)

    Fast Attack 293

    7 Bikers MOCU, 2 Meltaguns, AC - Power Fist

    Heavy Support 335
    Defiler Mutated Hull

    Dreadnought Twin-linked Lascannon, Mutated Hull


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    I Expect the Inquisition RecklessFable's Avatar
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    i'm not a Chaos player, but from a general standpoint, you've got a lot of power in very few units.

    For example, 9 chosen with 15 Dancing Ladies is obliterate anything they are near but then your champion will also let lose the Greater Demon.

    As an aside, won't the Nurgle Demon also threaten your own troops with his disease?

    15 Demons in a squad is a lot to fit under the template if that squad endes up getting into a tight spot.

    Your 10 man squads are using bolters and plasma. So they are essentially a full squad of regular marines, but don't have "And shall know no fear" like loyalist marines. Something about that bothers me. It just seems like a lot of points for a rapid fire phalanx when you could be doing something more interesting. If these were loyalist marines, they could have a drop pod, and that woud make all the difference.

    Just my random thoughts.
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    KITTENS GIVE MORBO GAS! theyak's Avatar
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    Here's my thoughts on your list-
    Quote Originally Posted by Brinders
    Constructive Criticism Please

    HQ 281
    Lord Zoltan MOCU, Infiltrate, Acursed Crozius, D Strength, CCW

    Great Unclean One Gift of Chaos

    Elites 470
    9 Chosen of Zoltan MOCU, Infiltrate, 3 Flamers, Daemon Icon, AC - Daemon Chains
    I'm assuming you're making one of the chosen a daemon host. Why? You're sacrificing an expensive model to bring in an even more expensive one. Consider the cost of the great unclean one to increase by the amount of the sacrificed model, and currently that's an expensive unclean one.

    Second. I really don't like chosen. I would suggest dropping them in favor of other things.
    Quote Originally Posted by Brinders
    3 Obliterators
    good
    Quote Originally Posted by Brinders
    Troops 621
    10 Marines MOCU, Boltguns, 2 Plasma Guns, AC - Power Fist

    10 Marines MOCU, Boltguns, 2 Plasma Guns, AC - Power Fist
    looks pretty good.
    I would add two more squads of CSMs, I don't like taking less than 4 core choices to a fight that's 2000 pts. They are your go-to guys.

    I would suggest making the other two squads 8 strong, 2x meltaguns, Ac with powerfist, infiltrate them, Designate one of these squads to have your daemonhost, infiltration will get your Great unclean one close to the enemy and when he pops, he doesn't have to go far.

    Quote Originally Posted by Brinders
    15 Daemonettes Damonic Talons, Warp Scream (In Daemon Icon)


    Consider making them 2 units of 7 instead of one of 15, this will give you more versatility.
    Quote Originally Posted by Brinders

    Fast Attack 293
    Quote Originally Posted by Brinders
    7 Bikers MOCU, 2 Meltaguns, AC - Power Fist
    Why not give these guys an icon too.
    They can be yet another daemon delivery device.
    Quote Originally Posted by Brinders

    Heavy Support 335
    Defiler Mutated Hull

    Dreadnought Twin-linked Lascannon, Mutated Hull
    [/QUOTE]
    Drop the mutated hull on the dread, keep them as cheap as possible.

    [QUOTE=Brinders]

    Hope this helps
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