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Pandora · April 21st, 2004, 07:07

Well, Tuesday night, and I want to get my story rolling again. I want feedback pretty bad, it would really make my day. Seventy or so reads, and only 6 replies, I really wish somebody would just jot down a little whenever they read the thing, it would really instill some confidence.

Blackhat · April 21st, 2004, 07:24

nice story! You should post it at http://fiction.librarium-online.com

Pandora · April 21st, 2004, 10:11

You told me to awhile back, and I said it was too much of a gaming-story place ;P

Exterminatus-Squeebie · April 21st, 2004, 17:07

Hey man, it is for writing. It doesn't have to be game related. Anyway, really nice story.

Pandora · May 4th, 2004, 00:30

Yet another update! Never will I let the story die.

Psipher19 · May 4th, 2004, 06:03

your writing exellant, pity its a zombie story though.

Pandora · May 5th, 2004, 06:00

You... You DARE to insult zombie's?!

Venerable Zoidberg · May 5th, 2004, 07:37

:blink: :o ...... that was bloody amazing, kinda creepy to. The world is explained brilliantly & i found the bit when the fire tank over to be humourous even if its not susspossed to be. :ph34r: Good Job!

Pandora · May 7th, 2004, 00:30

Updation! Smaller ones, I'm working on other stuff at the moment. It's hard to sit down and find an hour or two to write with, now that my insomnias not flaring up.

Fallen Angel · May 11th, 2004, 19:54

Thats incredible, keep it up, where can I find all of the updates?

April 21st, 2004, 07:07	#11 (permalink)
Pandora Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: California Posts: 560 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Rep Power: 72	<a onclick="pageTracker._trackPageview ('/outgoing/http_d1_openx_org_ck_php_n_a83f474f_amp_cb_46587945173');" rel='nofollow' href='http://d1.openx.org/ck.php?n=a83f474f&cb=46587945173' target='_blank'><img src='http://d1.openx.org/avw.php?zoneid=22572&cb=46587945173&n=a83f474f' border='0' alt='' /></a> Well, Tuesday night, and I want to get my story rolling again. I want feedback pretty bad, it would really make my day. Seventy or so reads, and only 6 replies, I really wish somebody would just jot down a little whenever they read the thing, it would really instill some confidence. __________________ <a href='http://www.onpoint-marketing.com/stealth-marketing.htm' target='_blank'>The future of marketing is here! Stealth Marketing!</a> Wait, you mean that optimism isn't fashionable anymore?! Lord of Smart-ass Youthimizzles. Soup's up, bitches!

April 21st, 2004, 07:24	#12 (permalink)
Blackhat The Landlord Join Date: Aug 2002 Location: Norway Age: 32 Posts: 4,536 Blog Entries: 14 Thanks: 11 Thanked 20 Times in 3 Posts Rep Power: 131 Total Awards: 1	nice story! You should post it at http://fiction.librarium-online.com __________________ Submit news to LO frontpage, click here Sell your stuff here and rate your favorite online store

April 21st, 2004, 10:11	#13 (permalink)
Pandora Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: California Posts: 560 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Rep Power: 72	You told me to awhile back, and I said it was too much of a gaming-story place ;P __________________ <a href='http://www.onpoint-marketing.com/stealth-marketing.htm' target='_blank'>The future of marketing is here! Stealth Marketing!</a> Wait, you mean that optimism isn't fashionable anymore?! Lord of Smart-ass Youthimizzles. Soup's up, bitches!

April 21st, 2004, 17:07	#14 (permalink)
Exterminatus-Squeebie Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: Wouldn't you like to know? Posts: 846 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Rep Power: 74	Hey man, it is for writing. It doesn't have to be game related. Anyway, really nice story. __________________

May 4th, 2004, 00:30	#15 (permalink)
Pandora Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: California Posts: 560 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Rep Power: 72	Yet another update! Never will I let the story die. __________________ <a href='http://www.onpoint-marketing.com/stealth-marketing.htm' target='_blank'>The future of marketing is here! Stealth Marketing!</a> Wait, you mean that optimism isn't fashionable anymore?! Lord of Smart-ass Youthimizzles. Soup's up, bitches!

May 4th, 2004, 06:03	#16 (permalink)
Psipher19 Senior Member Join Date: Dec 2003 Location: Santa Rosa, CA Age: 19 Posts: 819 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Rep Power: 74	your writing exellant, pity its a zombie story though. __________________ "Democracy is two wolves and a sheep voting on what's for dinner" -Ben Franklin -Guns don't kill people, bullets do.- -Support your local game store! Don't buy online or from GW stores.-

May 5th, 2004, 06:00	#17 (permalink)
Pandora Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: California Posts: 560 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Rep Power: 72	You... You DARE to insult zombie's?! __________________ <a href='http://www.onpoint-marketing.com/stealth-marketing.htm' target='_blank'>The future of marketing is here! Stealth Marketing!</a> Wait, you mean that optimism isn't fashionable anymore?! Lord of Smart-ass Youthimizzles. Soup's up, bitches!

May 5th, 2004, 07:37	#18 (permalink)
Venerable Zoidberg Member Join Date: Dec 2003 Location: Sydney Posts: 165 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Rep Power: 73	:blink: :o ...... that was bloody amazing, kinda creepy to. The world is explained brilliantly & i found the bit when the fire tank over to be humourous even if its not susspossed to be. :ph34r: Good Job! __________________ <u>Fear The Wrath Of The ANZAC Clan</u>

May 7th, 2004, 00:30	#19 (permalink)
Pandora Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: California Posts: 560 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Rep Power: 72	Updation! Smaller ones, I'm working on other stuff at the moment. It's hard to sit down and find an hour or two to write with, now that my insomnias not flaring up. __________________ <a href='http://www.onpoint-marketing.com/stealth-marketing.htm' target='_blank'>The future of marketing is here! Stealth Marketing!</a> Wait, you mean that optimism isn't fashionable anymore?! Lord of Smart-ass Youthimizzles. Soup's up, bitches!

May 11th, 2004, 19:54	#20 (permalink)
Fallen Angel Member Join Date: Mar 2004 Location: Nowhere Age: 19 Posts: 240 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Rep Power: 70	Thats incredible, keep it up, where can I find all of the updates? __________________ What doesn't kill you, cripples you for life Whoever invented the Rubix Cube had a sick and twisted sense of humor I will not eat oysters, i want my food dead, not sick, not wounded, dead.

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