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Wilhelm_III · May 22nd, 2004, 03:56

I like the story alot. Could you do me a favor and comment on my Story? If you do decide to be so kind as to make a constructive critisism, my story is called "A loveable love love" ...because I could not think of a real game. And could you do me anoth favor and write some more story?

Fallen Angel · May 26th, 2004, 20:52

More of the story, MORE!

Pandora · May 29th, 2004, 02:25

Holy moley, feedback, that's just, crazy. I'm not so sure I want to work on this one anymore, you'd all have to give me your money

Anyway, awhile back, right before I stopped checking it, and updating it, I moved it onto another website, and divided it into chapters.

You can find it Here

The Odd One · May 31st, 2004, 12:37

Quote:

Originally posted by Pandora@May 3 2004, 17:30
Yet another update! Never will I let the story die.

Then don't

Fallen Angel · May 31st, 2004, 12:39

d*mn straight!

Pandora · May 31st, 2004, 19:47

Oh, and by the way, the linked story is badly formatted, I know. Getting it all into pretty paragraphs would be the next undertaking, if I take the story back up again.

May 22nd, 2004, 03:56	#31 (permalink)
Wilhelm_III Member Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: None of your business!!!!!!! Posts: 234 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Rep Power: 73	<a onclick="pageTracker._trackPageview ('/outgoing/http_d1_openx_org_ck_php_n_a83f474f_amp_cb_46587945173');" rel='nofollow' href='http://d1.openx.org/ck.php?n=a83f474f&cb=46587945173' target='_blank'><img src='http://d1.openx.org/avw.php?zoneid=22572&cb=46587945173&n=a83f474f' border='0' alt='' /></a> I like the story alot. Could you do me a favor and comment on my Story? If you do decide to be so kind as to make a constructive critisism, my story is called "A loveable love love" ...because I could not think of a real game. And could you do me anoth favor and write some more story? __________________ http://www.solstice-mod.com <- Site\|Forums -> http://solstice-mod.com/index.php? http://www.freewebs.com/darkconquestmod/

May 26th, 2004, 20:52	#32 (permalink)
Fallen Angel Member Join Date: Mar 2004 Location: Nowhere Age: 19 Posts: 240 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Rep Power: 70	More of the story, MORE! __________________ What doesn't kill you, cripples you for life Whoever invented the Rubix Cube had a sick and twisted sense of humor I will not eat oysters, i want my food dead, not sick, not wounded, dead.

May 29th, 2004, 02:25	#33 (permalink)
Pandora Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: California Posts: 560 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Rep Power: 72	Holy moley, feedback, that's just, crazy. I'm not so sure I want to work on this one anymore, you'd all have to give me your money Anyway, awhile back, right before I stopped checking it, and updating it, I moved it onto another website, and divided it into chapters. You can find it Here __________________ <a href='http://www.onpoint-marketing.com/stealth-marketing.htm' target='_blank'>The future of marketing is here! Stealth Marketing!</a> Wait, you mean that optimism isn't fashionable anymore?! Lord of Smart-ass Youthimizzles. Soup's up, bitches!

May 31st, 2004, 12:39	#35 (permalink)
Fallen Angel Member Join Date: Mar 2004 Location: Nowhere Age: 19 Posts: 240 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Rep Power: 70	d*mn straight! __________________ What doesn't kill you, cripples you for life Whoever invented the Rubix Cube had a sick and twisted sense of humor I will not eat oysters, i want my food dead, not sick, not wounded, dead.

May 31st, 2004, 19:47	#36 (permalink)
Pandora Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: California Posts: 560 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Rep Power: 72	Oh, and by the way, the linked story is badly formatted, I know. Getting it all into pretty paragraphs would be the next undertaking, if I take the story back up again. __________________ <a href='http://www.onpoint-marketing.com/stealth-marketing.htm' target='_blank'>The future of marketing is here! Stealth Marketing!</a> Wait, you mean that optimism isn't fashionable anymore?! Lord of Smart-ass Youthimizzles. Soup's up, bitches!

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