A Series I'm Currently Writing

[Thee Forsaken One]

Here are the first two in the series.

Comments are greatly appreciated. I'm talking about constructive criticism (Which I appreciate the most), praise, writing tips, etc.

They're link because they're a bit long and I want to keep the formatting:

The First Chronicles of Avialle

Burning Vengeance (Part 1)
A Heart Full of Darkness (Part 2)
Unknown Assistance (Spinoff that fills in a short blank in part 2)

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I'll edit this post as I write more parts to it. Remember to post comments please.

The First Chronicles of Avialle- RTF Versions

Burning Vengeance (Part 1)
A Heart Full of Darkness (Part 2)
Unknown Assistance (Spinoff that fills in a short blank in part 2)

[The Fifth Horseman]

Care to actually post them? Some people just can't be bothered to download MS Word documents.

[Thee Forsaken One]

I gave my reasons above for not posting them. Personally I think they are far too long to be posted (first ones about 13000 words and the second is 17500 words) and I want to keep the formatting which I might lost if I post it. If I do then I'll have to spend forever fixing it which I would rather not do.

But if you don't want to download it that's your choice.

[Draconian]

Nice work all 3 pieces of text were wonderfull to read, i cant wait for the next part:lol:

[The Fifth Horseman]

Even if you don't want to post them on the forum, using an RTF packed to a ZIP would be better. Some people just don't have a copy of Office.

[Thee Forsaken One]

I'll get them converted to RTF as soon as but if you are using windows then wordpad should be able to open it.

[Thee Forsaken One]

Apologies for the double post but it has been a while since I updated this.

As requested I've added on Rich Text Format versions of the stories. (Links above)