The following us a pre heresy emporers children 1750 point army list I've been workin on , i'd be grateful for any criticisms or comments anyone has.

Captain w/ storm shield relic blade and artificer armour-160

Tactical squad w/ plasma and combi plasma, in a rhino w/ extra armour (x2) -480

Tactical squad w/ melta combi melta, in a drop pod ( x2) -450

8 sternguard w/ 3 conbi meltas heavy flamer and powerfist,in a drop pod-285

5 assault terminators in a drop pod-235

2 land speeders w/ multi meltas and heavy flamers-140

(The captain acts as lucius and accompanies the assault terminators)