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I like it a lot. I think it'd look even better with the toenails done up in a bone color to add some contrast and then I'd put some thin olive-green washes on parts of the staff to make it look woodsy and to reflect some of the other greens, but I'd keep them really subtle, really thinned out washes. And then I'd highlight the wood a bit more with some reddish oranges here and there to do the same as the wash. Bring out the red on the model and add some wood effects to the wood.
But honestly, it looks really nice. Thanks for sharing.
Looks cool. I like the book a lot, very neatly done.
My only critique is that you should take a picture against a background that will make your model contrast better.
I will try to find a more suitable background for the model, and I agree that the OSL doesn't look too good, I will either just remove it completely ot try something else to make it work.
One more thing, at my next warhammer night I may be able to convince one of my friends who is much better at photographing minis to take a picture of this for me.