I have been wanting to build a list around a Librarian character in my chapter...and then chronicle his exploits.

Going for friendly, balanced, against all-comers....I have two possible lists. Which list is more viable and are there changes that need to be addressed?

Chapter Traits: Be Swift as the Wind-We Stand Alone
Note: There are no bikes in this list intentionally as my bike list is built around another character in my chapter (I don't switch traits).

HQ – Eylan the White, Epistolary (394)
•Terminator Armor
•Force Weapon
•Stormbolter
•Fear of the Darkness
•Fury of the Ancients
Terminator Command Squad
•Veteran Sergeant with Power Weapon and Stormbolter
•1 Terminator with Assault Cannon and Chainfist
•1 Terminator with Assault Cannon and Powerfist
•1 Terminator with Powerfist and Stormbolter
•Drop Pod

Venerable Dreadnought (170)
•Assault Cannon
•Close Combat Weapon
•Heavy Flamer
•Drop Pod

Tactical Squad (105)
•Sergeant with Bolter
•4 Marines with Bolters
•1 Marine with Lascannon

Tactical Squad (105)
•Sergeant with Bolter
•4 Marines with Bolters
•1 Marine with Lascannon

Tactical Squad (257)
•Veteran Sergeant with Powerfist and Bolt Pistol
•1 Marine with Meltagun
•8 Marines with Bolters
•Frag Grenades
•Rino Transport with Smoke Launchers and Extra Armor

Tactical Squad (257)
•Veteran Sergeant with Powerfist and Bolt Pistol
•1 Marine with Meltagun
•8 Marines with Bolters
•Frag Grenades
•Rino Transport with Smoke Launchers and Extra Armor

Land Speeders (80)
• Assault Cannon and Heavy Bolter
Land Speeder (80)
•Assault Cannon and Heavy Bolter
Land Speeder (80)
•Assault Cannon and Heavy Bolter

Devastator Squad (200)
•Sergeant with Bolter
•4 Marines with Missile Launchers
•3 Marines with Bolters

Vindicator (135)
•Extra Armor
•Dozer Blade

Predator Annihilator (135)
•Heavy Bolter Sponsons
•Extra Armor

Total 1998

Next List:

HQ – Eylan the White, Codicier (147)
•Jump Pack
•Force Weapon
•Bolt Pistol
•Frag Grenades
•Veil of Time

Assault Squad (216)
•Veteran Sergeant with Powerfist and Bolt Pistol
•2 Marines with Plasma Pistols and Close Combat Weapons
•5 Marines with Bolt Pistols and Close Combat Weapons

Dreadnought (150)
•Assault Cannon
•Close Combat Weapon
•Heavy Flamer
•Drop Pod

Dreadnought (140)
•Assault Cannon
•Close Combat Weapon
•Heavy Bolter
•Drop Pod

Tactical Squad (105)
•Sergeant with Bolter
•4 Marines with Bolters
•1 Marine with Lascannon

Tactical Squad (105)
•Sergeant with Bolter
•4 Marines with Bolters
•1 Marine with Lascannon

Tactical Squad (257)
•Veteran Sergeant with Powerfist and Bolt Pistol
•1 Marine with Meltagun
•8 Marines with Bolters
•Rino Transport with Smoke Launchers and Extra Armor

Tactical Squad (257)
•Veteran Sergeant with Powerfist and Bolt Pistol
•1 Marine with Meltagun
•8 Marines with Bolters
•Rino Transport with Smoke Launchers and Extra Armor

Land Speeders (80)
• Assault Cannon and Heavy Bolter
Land Speeder (80)
•Assault Cannon and Heavy Bolter

Devastator Squad (200)
•Sergeant with Bolter
•4 Marines with Missile Launchers
•3 Marines with Bolters

Vindicator (130)
•Extra Armor

Predator Annihilator (135)
•Heavy Bolter Sponsons
•Extra Armor

Total 1999

Thanks