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This lists is 1500pts. I am planning to grow it to around 2000pts. Anyways the weakness i have noticed while playing with it are, lack of long range anti tank and lack of troop squads.
Some suggestions of what I should expand the list with are very welcome!
So far I have been taking units I like the look of because I only really play socially (against mechanized orks most of the time). I do like the look off the whirlwind and i wouldn't mind another dreadnought as i love the model. Bikes and land speeders are other units i like the look of.
Anyways here is the list!!!
1 w/ Powerfist
1 w/ Melta Gun
TL Heavy Bolters
4 sniper rifles
1 missile launcher
2 Chain Fists
10 Assault Marines
I'd recommend a predator autocannon and heavy bolters, this will give you some moblie long range killing power.
From your loadout on your marines I'd guess that you combat squad them so perhaps something to support your squads that seperate. So perhaps another dread or something else that has a decent ammount of firepower without sacraficing closecombat power or mobility. Not many units in the codex have this but perhaps a termi squad or a vet squad.
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