2000pts crimson fists, slow tactical foot build.. can it work

[killtacular99]

---HQ---
Pedro Kantor- xxxpts

---ELITES---
Sternguard(1- 305pts
-Power Fist
-Plasma Gun
-2 Combi-Weapons

Teminators(7)- 355pts
-Assault Cannon

Dreadnought- 150pts
-TL Lascannon
-Heavy Flamer

---TROOPS---
Tactical Squad- 180pts
-Meltagun
-Missile Launcher
-Melta Bomb

Tactical Squad- 205pts
-Plasma Gun
-Plasma Cannon
-Plasma Pistol
-Melta Bomb

Tactical Squad- 190pts
-Flamer
-Multi Melta
-Power Sword
-Melta Bomb

---FAST ATTACK---
Stormtalon Gunship- 135pts
-TL Lascannon

---HEAVY SUPPORT---
Predator- 165pts
-TL Lascannon
-Lascannon Sponsons

Vindicator- 115pts

Thunderfire Cannon- 100pts

TOTAL- 2010pts

The plan here is too to slowly move up with the infantry and destroy everything at range with pedro's inspiring presence and the terminators plus the dreadnought for assault help if needed, the stormtalon is there for anti-vehicle and anti- flyer support

also i understand that im 10pts over, I will just drop two melta-bombs to even it out.
Please comment and critique,
thanks

[moshhammer]

I would put powerfists on all of he sergeants in the tact squads. Also I also put sternguard in a droppod, very fun.