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a list I've been working on and fine tweaking to eventually build towards a tourney list, lemme know what you think. I've never used the Hellcannon before, but thought I'd give it a try because giants just don't do the trick for me.
Lord of Khorne, Manticore, Shield, Diabolic Splendour, Favour of the Gods, Talisman of Preservation, Chaos Runesword
Exalted Hero of Khorne, Juggernaut, Sword of Swift Slaying, Dawn Stone
Exalted Hero of Khorne, Fencers Blades, Dragonhelm, Battle Standard
Sorcerer, Lvl 2, Staff of Sorcery
Warriors X 11, Full Command, Banner of Rage, Shields
Warriors of Khorne X 11, Full Command, War Banner, Shields
War Hounds X 5
War Hounds X 5
Marauder Horsemen X 5, Flails, Throwing Stars, Musician
Marauders X 15, Musician, Flails
Knights of Khorne X 5, Standard, Blasted Standard
Total = 2496
I dig the theme, but I'd consider possibly dropping the Jugger hero for more bodies. 15 Marauders, 22 Warriors, 5 Knights, 5 Horseman, and a Manticore is a pretty fragile army at 2500.
I'm with Boshea. You don't really have many men, even for Warriors!!
Ditch the Normal Shield and go for the Charmed shield. You'll have to ditch Favour but...... Eh, it's up to you.
Jugger Hero: How many points is that Hero? What does he bring to that Knight unit? Is he worth the points or would another 5 Knights be more worth while? What about a whole new Warrior Unit?
BSB: In all honesty we don't really need the Fencers Blades. We're already higher WS than pretty much everyone going. The only people who are WS7 are Lords and in all honesty, that BSB would get this arse handed to him Vs a Lord as he has piss all save.
Sorcerer: Seeing as he's you're only sorcerer I'd grab him the 3rd Eye as well. Never tried the staff of sorcerery as I don't think +1 to dispel is worth all those points.
The Units you have look fine but I'd really like to see more of them. My 2k list has more Warriors in it that your 2.5k.