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This will be my first competitive list since the new dex came out. I am shooting for an all comers 2000pt force, So comments and advice are most welcome.
Archon- (He rides in a raider with the 8 incs and klaivex)
8 incubi- (escort my archon)
Drazhar- (he's with 7 incs in the other raider)
2 shock prow
2 chain snares
2 warrior teams of 10- (these guys provide support fire)
2 dark lance (one each team)
2 venom blades
Warrior team of 20- (These guys will assault from the webway)
2 splinter cannons
phantasmal grenade launcher
Talos- (I could either use him for support fire or dump him out of the webway)
TL splinter Cannons
add cc weapon
2 Ravager- (they'll take out the vehicles and the big nasties)
2 shock prow
2 flicker field
9 Mandrakes- (I can either dump them out of the webway or outflank.
Tell me what you guys think. thank you.
Your list seems decent but there are a few things, but firstly you're upgrading your vehicles too much, the raiders and ravagers only need a night shield and flickerfields, because ultimately they are very light vehicles and you want to keep their cost fairly low as they die easily. You should use these points to put agonisers into your warriors sure its pricey but completely worth it. One things you should consider is replacing your archon with 2 haemonculus one with a liquifer and the other with a shatter shard, both with venomblades, not agonisers because they aren't protected by their squad like sybarites are. then i'd put the liquifer in the 20 man warrior squad and the shatter shard in with the incubi, this would give them both pain tokens increase the survivability of both units. And drop the unit of mandrakes to 7 because that is easier to hide behind cover.