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hello this is my fist 1500 point army
cyrptek-abby staff vod-60
7 lychgaurd-shild swords-315
3 destroyers-3 heavy-180
the idea is to have obyron with the guard teleporting near the enemy and charging giving him max of 10 attacks on the charge.cryptek with the immortals teleporting into shooting range.if they get into danger use the eternity gate to teleport them back.zahndrekh and the lord will go with the immortals giving a 4+ reanimation the the heavy destroys will take care of the armor.monolith will just beast
In my experience 1500pt lists always need a bit of economising to get the best out of them.
Your lists inclusion of two named characters in my view is a bit points heavy and so I would personally drop obyron. Also I would either add a warscythe to the res orb lord or drop him as 65pts is quite costly for the benefit of one orb.
If you do make such savings I would then consider maybe getting an annihilation barge or two as at the 1500 level two av13 vehicles are tough and the barge provides some nice anti infantry.
On the plus side I’ve found zahnderkh to synergise well with lychguard with both counterattack and furious charge dramatically improving the unit, furthermore heavy destroyers also get a nice boon with tank hunters!
Anyhoo that’s my opinion, don’t let it stop you doing what you want to do.
thankyou for the crit the lord is going with the guard not with the immortals giving them a 4+ at 45 points per guard i think he will save more than double his points cost
If the Lord is going with the lychguard then some mind shackle scarabs might be worth considering as they are most awesome! Though the one wound on the lord means you don't want to add too many upgrades.
Just an extra thought.
If you're putting the Lord with the lychguard then a warscythe is a must. Don't give him any gear beyond the scythe and res orb, except for MAYBE mindshackle scarabs. You can allocate all the dangerous wounds onto your lychguard and keep the scythe lord buried.
That said, your list is pretty light on models. The lychguard doesn't need to be more than 5, cut it down and add some more toys. Try to squeeze in an Annihilation Barge if you can, they're just too good to pass up. Trading in the H. Destroyers for some wraiths would also be a good idea.