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-Veil of Darkness
Must kill 39 Necrons to phase out.
Figure VoD lord can take a unit of immortals around. and the other lord can stay around the remaining 4 units.
The list looks very nice. However there will probably be objectives in the tourney so you might want some mobility. The immortals might be enough mobility for you (they are so hard to kill) but I would drop one unit and the shroud for 2 squads of 3 destroyers. Hope this helps.
2009 Tourny records (W-L-D) (20-4-4):
9/56, 1/12, 2/14, 4/14, 32/82, 1/6, 16/72
The last tourney was in you just got +1 to your victory rating for each corner you controlled. 2 of which you could start with controlling. Havent played any where you had to get anything that a VoD/immortal squad couldnt occupy.