One major flaw is that you have no magic defense, the general with a of d could be switched out for a sorcerer. Also you have a pretty low model count (27 men), Maybe you could use marauders instead of warriors, the knights are good though.
I hate units of 12. I use rows of 5, not 4. I could reduce it to 15, i dont mind that. I also would like to fit marauders in. it seems like it would be a sorcerer or marauders. I think the model count is more important than the sorceror. i would have even less than i do now if i added a sorcerer.Reduce the chosen warriors to 12, you dont need that many with the extra points you could afford a sorcerer.
What would the bsb do? I already have the MoU which lets me reroll break tests. there would be no point to the bsb. I'd be wasting a hero choice and quite a few points.Lord of Chaos Undecided said:if you drop the chosen option then you will save yourself 120 points - enough to buy an aspiring champ as a BSB.