[Blue Wave]

Captain
-Power Weapon
-Storm Bolter
=80

ok, pretty good for the pts, but what is he supposed to do? what squad does he lead? IMO I would uprade to a chappie with jump pack, and lead the assault squad

Elites
2x Dreadnought
- Twin-Linked Lascannon
- CCW + Built in Storm bolter
=250pts

ok, thse will do well, but do you really need the lascannons? I would give them both Assaul Cannons, and use the pts for the LC for more men, or HQ

Tactical Squad
4x Space marine
1x Sergeant -Bolter
-Ml
- Plasma gun
=85pts

Tactical Squad
4x Space marine
1x Sergeant
-Ml
=80pts

Tactical Squad
4x Space Marine
1x Sergeant -Bolter
-Heavy bolter
=80pts

Ok, for these 3 squads, i might upgrade ML to LC, because then your squad has the ability to kill anything effectively, I would also add more men to these squads, because they are real thin, and would be wiped easy

1x Land Speeder Tornado
-Heavy Bolter
-Assault cannon
=80pts

1x Land Speeder Tornado
-Heavy Bolter
-Assault Cannon
=80pts

Excellent, these are, as ussual an excellent idea, and will serve very useful against all enemys

Assault Squad
7x Space marine
– CCW + Bolt Pistol
1x Sergeant
– Power Weapon + Bolt pistol
-Terminator Honors
2x Space marine
-CCW + Plasma pistol
=255pts

Ok they will do well in close combat, but they need a chappie to really make them excel

Chapter Traits
-Courageous: See but don’t be seen and Trust your battle brothers.
-Drawback: Flesh over steel

Why do you have these traits, when you don't use them? And if you wanted to really improve you Assault Marines, you would take the trait NO MERCY, NO RESPITE, and give them Furious Charge

Ok, not a bad list, but i think you should uprade you HQ a bit, and just make sure pts for you units put your traits to use I you take them:hmm:

 

[Blue Wave]

Actually for a Blood Ravens list you have to take those traits. it lists them in the "famous chapters" list in the divergences part of the book as their traits.

Woops, sorry about that,:wacko: forgot that they were Blood Ravens, thanks