[funnymouth]

waaaaaayyy to top heavy
you need more troops. ists die fast - you wont have a model on the table by the time your ds-ers. the inq squad should have a sage or 2 to make your expensive unit more effective. it doesnt really need a rhino - cant move and shoot and he should be nowhere near the front lines.
imho plasma sucks - you pay to kill your own troops, esp when the higher strength, higher ap (for auto pen), assault, melta weapons are available.

 

[funnymouth]

ok,
lose the rhino on the inq squad.
lose a tp homer (your only dsing 1 unit - and usually non tp deepstriking units still do ok)
because you are not taking a tp homer lose one of the veterans.
emperor's tarot, is risky, but can be fun. you could drop it. bionics - nice to keep the uber lord alive, but not necessary. ...thats stilll probably only 100+ anyhow....hummmmm....
i dont know where you could get the rest. its not a bad list, i like it.