[Deadpool420]

traits
blessed be the warriors
die standing

going to be making the fluff later on when i figure my list out

HQ
MoS
(termie honours/jump pack/pair of LC's) 165
Epistolary
(iron halo/jump pack/termie honour/bp/familiar)
(might of heros/veil of time) 231

ELITES
10 man assualt squad
(furious charge/2xplasma pistol/1x sarg w/ pf) 285
10 man assualt squad
(furious charge/2xplasma pistol/1x sarg w/ pf) 285
dread
(assualt cannon/DCCW/extra armour) 110

TROOP
5 man tact squad
(lascannon) 90
5 man tact squad
(lascannon) 90
5 man tact squad
(lascannon) 90
7 man scout
(6x sniper/1x hb) 126

FAST ATTACK
1x LST
(HB/AC) 80
1x LST
(HB/AC) 80
1x LST
(HB/AC) 80

HEAVY SUPPORT
8 man dev squad
(4x bolter/4xmissile) 200
whirlwind
(cant decide on which turret yet/) 85

total 1997

as you can see the lib and chappy each take an assualt squad
the tact squad are suppose to pop tanks w/ the lascannons
the whirlwind is going to be laying mine or firing on infantry
the LST's are to push up the flank and go troop hunting
scout will fire on high toughness chars or pin squads so my LST's can hit them hard
my assualt squads are going to rush up behind cover and leave thier ranks a mess

can u guys tell me how you think this list would do vs all comers

all help is appreciated
thx
deadpool420

 

[Blue Wave]

HQ
MoS
(termie honours/jump pack/pair of LC's) 165
Epistolary
(iron halo/jump pack/termie honour/bp/familiar)
(might of heros/veil of time) 231

Ok, I see how you like having two oober Assault squads led by these leaders, but they(especially the Librarian) are very exspensive. IMO, I would drop the 231pt Librarian, for some more marines, or another dread(if you have one)

ELITES
10 man assualt squad
(furious charge/2xplasma pistol/1x sarg w/ pf) 285
10 man assualt squad
(furious charge/2xplasma pistol/1x sarg w/ pf) 285
dread
(assualt cannon/DCCW/extra armour) 110

Ok for the assault squads, i would take one of them for sure(for the Chappie), but IMO ont two, two are quite exspensive. As for the Dread, unless you have another one, or some more armour, it will get targeted by all the enemys anti-tank.

TROOP
5 man tact squad
(lascannon) 90
5 man tact squad
(lascannon) 90
5 man tact squad
(lascannon) 90
7 man scout
(6x sniper/1x hb) 126

Ok, these will do very well against armour/high toughness, but they are quite small, so, if you decide to drop the assault squad, and/or the Librarian, you can bulk up these squads, and mabey add a plasma rifle to them. The scouts sound like not a bad idea, although I find snipers to be uneffective usually, but thats my opinion

FAST ATTACK
1x LST
(HB/AC) 80
1x LST
(HB/AC) 80
1x LST
(HB/AC) 80

Excellent, LST's are always a good idea, cause the can kill whatever they want:shifty:

HEAVY SUPPORT
8 man dev squad
(4x bolter/4xmissile) 200
whirlwind
(cant decide on which turret yet/) 85

Both these are a good use of points, and, as for the Whirlwind's missles, it dosent matter what missles you glue on the the turret, and when it comes to the game, just tell your(at the begining) opponent what missles you are taking for that game

Ok, not a bad list at all, you just need to decide what units fit, the Assault squads, are a lot of pts, but if your going for the all out assault rush, then keep them. And with the Dread, either have more armour, get rid of it, or take a different Trait Disadvanted, and give the Dread a Drop Pod

 

[Deadpool420]

i was thinking of toning the lib down and adding to my reg squads

but i made this out of fluff im in the process of finishing. the army is assualt oriented as you can see or guess

but maybe ill trade the lib out for a master to join the other assualt squad and that would save me 110 just off the lib
so ill see what else i can do

 

[ForgedInTheFurnaceOfWar]

Epistolary
(iron halo/jump pack/termie honour/bp/familiar)
(might of heros/veil of time) 231

This guy is way to expensive. I suggest ditching him, or if you want a librarain, take the cheaper one, with fear of the darkness, OR might of heros. If you go with veil of time, select a combat shield instead of iron halo. Ditch the familiar.

7 man scout
(6x sniper/1x hb) 126

Ditch these, you dont need to pin anything.

whirlwind
(cant decide on which turret yet/) 85

You dont need another infantry killer, ditch this.

Take more anti tank/heavy support.

Do not take melta bombs on assault squad.

 

[Deadpool420]

anything else i can add remove to this list?

 

[ForgedInTheFurnaceOfWar]

Maybe another dev squad just like the one you already have.