wow your army is really multipurpose and if thats your complete aim then I would say you're fine cept the commander and the command squad don't fit together. He has some godlike power weapons (my preferred choice for an HQ especially with jump packs to get there faster)
but his command squad is random even for multipurpose....drop the rocket launcher so u can move and shoot and put in a power sword maybe so u can deal more damage in close combat.
better yet...drop the command squad if its not that important for some veterans with power weapons.
also organize your tactical squads into groups. One carries heavy stuff, one carries assault weapons so u can move with one squad and shoot with the other so your fire power is never cut in half. drop the power fist on the shooty tactical to free up some points for extra marines for the close up one.
but his command squad is random even for multipurpose....drop the rocket launcher so u can move and shoot and put in a power sword maybe so u can deal more damage in close combat.
better yet...drop the command squad if its not that important for some veterans with power weapons.
also organize your tactical squads into groups. One carries heavy stuff, one carries assault weapons so u can move with one squad and shoot with the other so your fire power is never cut in half. drop the power fist on the shooty tactical to free up some points for extra marines for the close up one.