Alright i will give it a try 
I've just been told that teh great weapon on your lord is useless because you get one buying the ms rune of kragg the grim(voila 6 points extra!) Also i don't think u will need the rune of striking but i'm not sure..
What i really do miss is your BSB, I will never go to war without it!
I would consider taking the rangers, you want to avoid a gunline but a real dwarf should bring at last 1 handgun or crossbow, it will save points taking 10 thunderers or crossbows. Rangers are slow so you split your army, You could consider a unit of miners to get the enemies warmachines and small units.
About your warriors, i would advise to give them shield and get rid of the gw, they will get an as of 3+ instead of 5+ which make them a lot harder to kill.
You got some ironbreakers but in my eyes the unit should be bigger to at least 15(I mostly use 20) to make them work.
I would put away that rune of immolation on your bolt thrower and put a rune of penetration and a rune of burning on it. Just for the damage and the chariots, large targets etc.( and if you have the points, engineers for 15pts for the bs)
I hope i could help and have fun!:soldier:
I've just been told that teh great weapon on your lord is useless because you get one buying the ms rune of kragg the grim(voila 6 points extra!) Also i don't think u will need the rune of striking but i'm not sure..
What i really do miss is your BSB, I will never go to war without it!
I would consider taking the rangers, you want to avoid a gunline but a real dwarf should bring at last 1 handgun or crossbow, it will save points taking 10 thunderers or crossbows. Rangers are slow so you split your army, You could consider a unit of miners to get the enemies warmachines and small units.
About your warriors, i would advise to give them shield and get rid of the gw, they will get an as of 3+ instead of 5+ which make them a lot harder to kill.
You got some ironbreakers but in my eyes the unit should be bigger to at least 15(I mostly use 20) to make them work.
I would put away that rune of immolation on your bolt thrower and put a rune of penetration and a rune of burning on it. Just for the damage and the chariots, large targets etc.( and if you have the points, engineers for 15pts for the bs)
I hope i could help and have fun!:soldier: