Commentary
Good Start on the list, I see someone has been reading Chaosbrynn's Tactica. Here's my $0.02:
1. Drop the Librarian - He's taking up alot of points, and it would be a shame to see him taken out in the first round of combat by another HQ. Unless you're going to have him sit back and use his powers, he isn't your best bang for the buck. By my guess he's taking almost 200+ points, which is alot for HQ. A better option would be to replace him with a chappy with basic equipment. You'd get a solid HQ choice with a cost in the area of 100 points.
2. Transport - All your army is currently footslogging across the board. Also, you won't be able to fire that Heavy Bolter for a few rounds because you'll be carring it all over creation. I would recommend using the points saved from the librarian for one of two things: Infiltrate (use "See but don't be Seen" divergence) or Drop Pods. I don't recommend Rhinos or Razorbacks due to their ability to be popped easily. Using either transport will get your guys into the fray faster. Just don't use it if you're going against a really assaulty army (orcs for instance).
3.Third tac squad, the one with the meltas - Definitely put them in a drop pod and then drop them near the enemy armor, you'll open alot of tin cans quickly. The true grit may help you in that situation, but I'd also suggest rounding the squad out to a nice 10.
Past that Looks good. I wish you luck.
Good Hunting.
Good Start on the list, I see someone has been reading Chaosbrynn's Tactica. Here's my $0.02:
1. Drop the Librarian - He's taking up alot of points, and it would be a shame to see him taken out in the first round of combat by another HQ. Unless you're going to have him sit back and use his powers, he isn't your best bang for the buck. By my guess he's taking almost 200+ points, which is alot for HQ. A better option would be to replace him with a chappy with basic equipment. You'd get a solid HQ choice with a cost in the area of 100 points.
2. Transport - All your army is currently footslogging across the board. Also, you won't be able to fire that Heavy Bolter for a few rounds because you'll be carring it all over creation. I would recommend using the points saved from the librarian for one of two things: Infiltrate (use "See but don't be Seen" divergence) or Drop Pods. I don't recommend Rhinos or Razorbacks due to their ability to be popped easily. Using either transport will get your guys into the fray faster. Just don't use it if you're going against a really assaulty army (orcs for instance).
3.Third tac squad, the one with the meltas - Definitely put them in a drop pod and then drop them near the enemy armor, you'll open alot of tin cans quickly. The true grit may help you in that situation, but I'd also suggest rounding the squad out to a nice 10.
Past that Looks good. I wish you luck.
Good Hunting.