Errr I hate to tell you this Chemicalcaveman, but you need to re format it, its impossible to read.
[edit] cool, right, firstly you haven't said what the IC's are (wolf lord, wolf priest etc).
Anyway, on to the list:
Most of it is good, you could do with some form of heavy support, I Suggest using a venerable dreadnaught as your second HQ as they are just so versatile. A unit of long fangs might be a good idea as well, even though they are a bit pricey they aren't a bad unit.
I would give the BC units a wolf guard just to give them a bit more of an edge, maybe give them rhinos (you would have to make the squad 9 strong).
The grey hunters are good, you may not need to give them the CCW even though they have true grit, either way they are a good solid core.
I feel assault cannons are better on the wolf guard than a heavy flamer, it give you a bit more firepower and your CC abilities don't suffer.
Hope this helps.
[edit] cool, right, firstly you haven't said what the IC's are (wolf lord, wolf priest etc).
Anyway, on to the list:
Most of it is good, you could do with some form of heavy support, I Suggest using a venerable dreadnaught as your second HQ as they are just so versatile. A unit of long fangs might be a good idea as well, even though they are a bit pricey they aren't a bad unit.
I would give the BC units a wolf guard just to give them a bit more of an edge, maybe give them rhinos (you would have to make the squad 9 strong).
The grey hunters are good, you may not need to give them the CCW even though they have true grit, either way they are a good solid core.
I feel assault cannons are better on the wolf guard than a heavy flamer, it give you a bit more firepower and your CC abilities don't suffer.
Hope this helps.